CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
this is an excellent contest entry. very apt, simple, to the point with great imagery all its own. good luck, dear.
pea
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this is an excellent contest entry. very apt, simple, to the point with great imagery all its own. good luck, dear.
pea
Comment Written 02-Jan-2009
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Loved this one! You perfectly captured in only a few words the excitement of New Year's Eve in NY City. Great job.
Wishing you the best in 2009 - sherry
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Loved this one! You perfectly captured in only a few words the excitement of New Year's Eve in NY City. Great job.
Wishing you the best in 2009 - sherry
Comment Written 01-Jan-2009
Comment from Firefly54
Thankf for adding that not about millyen as opposed to million. This works very well, and is certainly ideal for the New Year
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Thankf for adding that not about millyen as opposed to million. This works very well, and is certainly ideal for the New Year
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
Comment from Minglement
Wonderful spirit and excitement in this one. Great entry for the contest. Love the illustration and the color mood to enhance it. Good luck.
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Wonderful spirit and excitement in this one. Great entry for the contest. Love the illustration and the color mood to enhance it. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2008
Comment from jshep
Well done. You have said it all. The world sees that ball drop in time square, and as always, the New Year comes. Great presentation and well executed. Joyce
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Well done. You have said it all. The world sees that ball drop in time square, and as always, the New Year comes. Great presentation and well executed. Joyce
Comment Written 29-Dec-2008
Comment from babylonia
i am sure this will be happening soon enough. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. made me giggle.
keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
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i am sure this will be happening soon enough. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. made me giggle.
keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 29-Dec-2008
Comment from adewpearl
This is a strong contender because you use such vivid concrete imagery - I can visualize the crowd as I read - I've had the pleasure of going to Times Square on New Year's Eve a few times, and you brought all the memories back
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This is a strong contender because you use such vivid concrete imagery - I can visualize the crowd as I read - I've had the pleasure of going to Times Square on New Year's Eve a few times, and you brought all the memories back
Comment Written 29-Dec-2008
Comment from Juleeann
I am so glad I found you here at FS. I simply enjoy every word of everything you write. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Juleeann
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I am so glad I found you here at FS. I simply enjoy every word of everything you write. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Juleeann
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
Comment from Algernon
Look closely. I might be in that pic. Yup, I'm the one with a black crombie on.
That is the one thing we always beat the yanks to. Then next year, we win by 5 hours.
Indeed, always use the Oxford and save real English. That Darn Webster bloke change real English. Even niking U.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Look closely. I might be in that pic. Yup, I'm the one with a black crombie on.
That is the one thing we always beat the yanks to. Then next year, we win by 5 hours.
Indeed, always use the Oxford and save real English. That Darn Webster bloke change real English. Even niking U.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2008
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Can you believe the nerve of us yanks to change the spelling of words like gaol and tyre???!!! Shocking!!! Yeah, forget about the "U"...last rites given! For me? I favour colour! LOL!! However, we Americans are lobbying for GMT to be based in New York, so forget about your 5 hour advantage in future. Sorry.... ;-(( Sue
Comment from jeslaf
Great break from lines two to three with "2009"--I grew up in NYC and the ball is a classic, as is the phrase, "big apple"--takes me back to those days with a smile. Nice work!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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Great break from lines two to three with "2009"--I grew up in NYC and the ball is a classic, as is the phrase, "big apple"--takes me back to those days with a smile. Nice work!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2008
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jeslaf, what would America be like without our Flagship, New York? I think sometimes we all take it for granted! So glad you liked this little piece. Thank you very much for the most kind review and for your compliment on the satori. With warm regards, Sue