Comment from Jan Anderegg

Excellent

This is so delightful! I really enjoyed it. I wish you all the best in the contest. Too funny. I know what you mean about FanStory. I'm a tad addicted myself!
Very well done. Still smiling here.

Jan

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2008

Just a tad, I'm sure. You're a bit slack by the looks of all those red and blue stars!! Ha! Speaking of blue stars, I had no idea how much reviewing I've done and I've only just got to level 4. Great thing, this site. Thanks so much for your great review and comments! :-)) Sue

Comment from Sallyo

Good

Great fun, and apposite for this site and this contest. I found the second line didn't blend quite as well as it might... as if the first word (syllable) could have been missed to make the flow better.

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 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2008

Sallyo, it's a 10-10-5-5-10, but you never know how it's being sounded out sometimes (I'll give ya the mail! HA!)......HAD to throw that old slang in there!! Glad you liked it and thanks for your very kind review. :-)) Sue

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

LOL made me smile. made me giggle. made me dance and give a wiggle. this is definitely good. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

Comment from Scarlettdreams

Excellent

These sites can indeed be addictive. This is a nice contest entry. I wish you good luck in the running. Well done. Bravo Bravo

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

Comment from wierdgrace

Excellent

what a great and funny limerick this is perfect for this contest, colors words all rhymes are structure perfect, I found no error and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Thanks, weirdgrace! It was a fun contest. Glad you enjoyed. With regards, Sue

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Well done this is very creative and reads very well I like the art work you have chosen to highlight the piece good luck regards Fuller

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Fuller, thanks for your kind review and am glad you enjoyed it! :-) Sue

Comment from Firefly54

Excellent

Oh, very funny! But I know what you mean about the need for a daily fix! I can see that these are going to be very hard to judge and vote for the best! Good luck to you, I'm sure you had fun thinking it up!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Yeah, and when I first got onto this site, I thought I was the only "weirdo addict" DUH!!! Ha! Thanks for your very kind review. ;-)) Sue

Comment from chaswriter

Excellent

Sue - That is imaginative and funny. Love your wit on this limerick. I even had to look up 'satori'. Funny that I thought all limericks started: "There once was a man from Nantucket". LOL. Charlie.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Ha! We get creative over here at Fanstory, huh?? Loved this contest. Everyone had a good time. Now, excuse me while I go get another 'fix'.... Sue

Comment from eveeator

Excellent

very good, and very topical for all Fanstory writers, love the thought the star artwork and the words in your limerick, thanks also for the info re the limerick, good contest entry and I wish you luck with it, keep well regards yvonne

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Yvonne, thanks so much for your review! Glad you have enjoyed the contest! With regards, Sue

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

Yvonne, thanks so much for your review! Glad you have enjoyed the contest! With regards, Sue

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Love the perfect satori line - it is a perfect satori!
LOL
This is fun, for all FS'ians. I am sure each reviewer will smile. No nits in this well presented and humorous entry for the limerick contest.

:)


Best of luck in the contest.

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2008

No NITS??? Oh, thank God....I just got another FIX!! Ha!! Thanks so much for your review, Rama.....with regards, Sue