CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from ROBbury
Thought provoking! Liked the opening statement "Hallowed is the ground" - really captured my attention. Thought the whole concept was very clever. Liked the comparison to new adventures against the concept of a new path.
Very Well Done!
ROB
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Thought provoking! Liked the opening statement "Hallowed is the ground" - really captured my attention. Thought the whole concept was very clever. Liked the comparison to new adventures against the concept of a new path.
Very Well Done!
ROB
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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You got it, Rob! A new adventure! So glad you enjoyed my poem. And thank you very much for your generous review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Minglement
This is a beautifully evocative piece with a terrific message. A difficult task in so short a space. You put the reader there. Great work.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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This is a beautifully evocative piece with a terrific message. A difficult task in so short a space. You put the reader there. Great work.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Your most generous review is so appreciated! And thank you for your lovely comments! Warmest regards, Sue
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You're very welcome. Take care - M.
Comment from mindseye
Very true. The world has so many options and we have the opportunity to build whatever life we want there is "No guide, nor a map" which makes it both scary and inviting. I agree, you gain a lot by "looking fear in the face".
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Very true. The world has so many options and we have the opportunity to build whatever life we want there is "No guide, nor a map" which makes it both scary and inviting. I agree, you gain a lot by "looking fear in the face".
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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If we didn't look at fear in the face, we could shribble up! And we must always cut to that new path we always wanted. Your very generous review and comments are so appreciated. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Another excellent poem, 6teezkid. Well written and fantastic wording. Terrific stanzas flowing so effortlessly we enjoy the ride through them, slowly savoring your words. Great job.
Reggie
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Another excellent poem, 6teezkid. Well written and fantastic wording. Terrific stanzas flowing so effortlessly we enjoy the ride through them, slowly savoring your words. Great job.
Reggie
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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Reggie, I am so happy that you have enjoyed my poems. And I thank you again for your most generous review and specific comments. Means so much and keeps me encouraged to continue writing! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from rizaroza
This is a a beautiful poem. Soft and strong and right on point. Your flow is well-crafted and I completely understand why you have the "All Time Best" ribbon!
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This is a a beautiful poem. Soft and strong and right on point. Your flow is well-crafted and I completely understand why you have the "All Time Best" ribbon!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Extraordinarily clever and so perfectly written! Well done my friend What a beautiful description of the
beauty Extraordinarily clever and so perfectly written! Well done my friend There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to your next
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Extraordinarily clever and so perfectly written! Well done my friend What a beautiful description of the
beauty Extraordinarily clever and so perfectly written! Well done my friend There was no error. No typos. Nothing to change. I look forward to your next
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from lathunder
How true it is. To face your fears gives you courage to know that you did it. Thank you for sharing this. I thought it was fantastic.
L.A.Thunder
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How true it is. To face your fears gives you courage to know that you did it. Thank you for sharing this. I thought it was fantastic.
L.A.Thunder
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2008
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lathunder, thank you so much for your generous review. I am so glad you enjoyed my poem. It is so true that we all come to a point to face our fears and we have truly come to know ourselves more when go for what we want, in the face of the lack of confidence. Triumph is my favorite word! Ha! With regards, Sue
Comment from davidray
Hi again, 6teez,
Wel, you've done it again. A poem written from the heart. So simple, yet, so truthfully prosed. Everything in life shapes us into being who we become, good and bad. Thanks again for sharing. Enjoyed this. :)
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Hi again, 6teez,
Wel, you've done it again. A poem written from the heart. So simple, yet, so truthfully prosed. Everything in life shapes us into being who we become, good and bad. Thanks again for sharing. Enjoyed this. :)
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Kazz
Beautiful and universal, which is what poetry is all about. I loved the flow and ebb of the words and the message came through loud and clear. You are on a path to a book of inspirational poems here.
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Beautiful and universal, which is what poetry is all about. I loved the flow and ebb of the words and the message came through loud and clear. You are on a path to a book of inspirational poems here.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Aussie
Fear - the only way out is through. When in deep water, become a diver. I thought your poem was great. Anything new takes courage to experience. Your poem has eloquence of words and truth in lines. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Fear - the only way out is through. When in deep water, become a diver. I thought your poem was great. Anything new takes courage to experience. Your poem has eloquence of words and truth in lines. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008