Foxtales From The Front Porch
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Coffee Monkey"Stories told from the heart
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Comment from c_lucas
Any love relationship without humor is doomed from the start. If a couple cannot see some things in a humorous manner, trouble will follow. Well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Any love relationship without humor is doomed from the start. If a couple cannot see some things in a humorous manner, trouble will follow. Well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Thank you. Perhaps you will also enjoy Fire and Ice, about our relationship before we married.
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You're welcome. Charlie
Comment from joan marie
I loved this. You get a Gotcha on the ending. Didn't see it coming. Just goes to show you it doesn't take thousands of words to write a great story like this. joan marie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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I loved this. You get a Gotcha on the ending. Didn't see it coming. Just goes to show you it doesn't take thousands of words to write a great story like this. joan marie
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Thank you. Perhaps you will also enjoy Fire and Ice, about our relationship before we married.
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Most of my stories have "gotcha endings." I think those are the incidents I tend to recall.
Or I am channeling O. Henry.
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It is All Hallow's Eve coming up, so I would say channeling. jm
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Thanks for the reading tip.jm
Comment from MissCellanea
Long and happy marriages are rare and a thing to be celebrated. Enjoyed the humor immensely. Thanks for sharing such a sweet story. Sue
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Long and happy marriages are rare and a thing to be celebrated. Enjoyed the humor immensely. Thanks for sharing such a sweet story. Sue
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Thank you. Perhaps you will also enjoy Fire and Ice, about our relationship before we married.
Comment from PatriciaLiteHickman
the author notes on top made me smile; i think we need humor no matter what the source :-)
great opening; lol my daughters have kids 5 yrs apart; i can relate; took 15 yrs before we could leave the house without a stroller :-) at least some of the 9 grandchildren were born close together :-)
I love the ending; great story here! fits the category very well; no corrections to be found;
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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the author notes on top made me smile; i think we need humor no matter what the source :-)
great opening; lol my daughters have kids 5 yrs apart; i can relate; took 15 yrs before we could leave the house without a stroller :-) at least some of the 9 grandchildren were born close together :-)
I love the ending; great story here! fits the category very well; no corrections to be found;
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Thank you.
Perhaps you will also enjoy Fire and Ice, about our relationship before we married.
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You are very welcome for the review; and yes! I did enjoy that; good storytelling too. I'm still smiling; Blessings on your night. Tricia
Comment from Judian James
Oh, God bless long marriages. I just celebrated 25 years and couldn't be happier. This was a charming little tale of love, duty and humor!! excellent
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Oh, God bless long marriages. I just celebrated 25 years and couldn't be happier. This was a charming little tale of love, duty and humor!! excellent
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Thank you.
You may also enjoy 'Fire and Ice, about our relationship before we married!
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I wrote a love poem about my husband and me called Fire and Water!!
I'll be sure to look it up. Thanks
Comment from dportwood
Glad you can take being called a monkey. Not sure I could, although I've been called a lot worse. I like your little humor story and it was a pleasure to read it. Good job.
Duane
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Glad you can take being called a monkey. Not sure I could, although I've been called a lot worse. I like your little humor story and it was a pleasure to read it. Good job.
Duane
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Well I am a monkey at times.
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perhaps you'd also enjoy 'Fire and Ice' about our relationship before we married.
