The Cyber Space Garden
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Fire Piston Orchid"The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,
5 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
this poem makes one think and that is a very good thing. You have written this with some excellent poetic language in its phrases.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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this poem makes one think and that is a very good thing. You have written this with some excellent poetic language in its phrases.This was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Humble Thanks, Kingsland
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written it reads well with good descriptions may I suggest a colour change for the writing though well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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This is very well written it reads well with good descriptions may I suggest a colour change for the writing though well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Humble Thanks, Fuller
Comment from Annmuma
I don't know if I understand this message at all. What I do know is that reading it 'feels good' and maybe that's enough to make good poetry. Enjoyed. ann
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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I don't know if I understand this message at all. What I do know is that reading it 'feels good' and maybe that's enough to make good poetry. Enjoyed. ann
Comment Written 30-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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Thanks, Annmuma
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Thanks, Annmuma
Comment from P1
well written piece of poetry
lovely colour and imagery in your words
and the picture of perfect for this piece
pleasure to read and review as always hugs lynda
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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well written piece of poetry
lovely colour and imagery in your words
and the picture of perfect for this piece
pleasure to read and review as always hugs lynda
Comment Written 30-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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Humble Thanks, lynda
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Humble Thanks, lynda
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Superb!!! Lovely, lovely imagery and great flow to the piece. Love the lines:
In my eyes heavens' masterpiece;
to my nose, delight of infusion,
flowery vapors
Nice work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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Superb!!! Lovely, lovely imagery and great flow to the piece. Love the lines:
In my eyes heavens' masterpiece;
to my nose, delight of infusion,
flowery vapors
Nice work. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 30-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2008
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Humble Thanks, Susanne
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Humble Thanks, Susanne