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The Face of Suffering

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Comment from mtngalofnc
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Hi L&P,
My tears fall to mingle with yours in the bond of friendship and motherhood and oh, how I wish there was more that I could do to help you at this time. I am so sorry for your loss. But I know there is comfort in knowing she is in the arms of Jesus and no longer in pain. I have missed you so and my thoughts were with you and your daughter often. I hope that writing will help to ease your pain. This poem is such a lovely tribute to your time in this life spent together. Your baby passed on my baby's birthday. My daughter turned 27 on this day. Please know that my heart and prayers are always with you. Thank you for sharing this very personal part of your life with us. God bless you, Barb.
mtngalofnc, Becky

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Oh dear Becky. thank you so much dear lady. Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from nitad
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Barbara,
I am so sorry that your daughter had to suffer the way she did during her short time here on earth. But you can rest easy knowing that she suffers no more and is home in heaven, waiting for the day the two of you will be reunited.
God's blessings and prayers to you during this most difficult time.
Take care,
Nita

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you dear nitad. Blessings L&P2u
Comment from eveeator
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This is so sad, all you can do is cry, your baby regardless of age, I hope you have found and continue to find the strength to work through this, your poem is a great tribute to your baby/daughter and you were so blessed to see God come to take her to that special place, keep heart, God bless xxx

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you so much. I am Blesed. Blessings 2 u & L&P
Comment from unidian
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If this was your 'child' then it is always painful to see a daughter die before her time... before your time. We all pray we never have to see our children pass away.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you unidian,so true, Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from wierdgrace
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I am just amazed how you could write this, as you are stronger than I, My aunt i was by her bed. and I have cancer, but I will fight always. You are a wonderful poet, and your daughter hears you I am sure, I love you, god bless you, and I pray for your heart. now I have to dry my eyes. wonderful excellent writing. No errors.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you Grace. I'm so sorry and prayers for you.Hang in there, Blessings dear lady. L&P2u
reply by wierdgrace on 26-Oct-2008
    u are so welcome, did you win, if so congrat.
Comment from skye
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I am so sorry for your loss, and happy for the beautiful experience of being there when she died.
Nothing is harder, nothing can break your heart more than losing a child.
Beautiful words, beautiful expression of love.
Thanks for sharing, in your time of loss.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you skye, Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Sarah Sixx
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This was extremely beautiful and I am so very sorry for your loss. I am sure she is very much at peace now with God..........

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Yes, me also. Thank you, Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from brightside1099
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How strong you are to be able to write such a sad good-bye to your baby girl. This is beautifully written and is a wonderful tribute to her life. It's hard to lose a child. I can't imagine going through this when that child is 47. Life gets easier after these types of losses, but it takes a while. Writing is a good outlet.

BB

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Yes it is. Thank you BB, not much i think can hurt too much more after this, Blessings. L&P2u
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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This is so sad - my heart goes

out to you - to lose a child - I

just can't imagine the pain.

God Bless and take care,
Margaret.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you Margaret. Blessings, L&P2u
Comment from Donovan
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You have my sympathy. The most unnatural event in mankind is a child leaving before the parent. I commend you for sharing and know that though it never gets easier, you will find everlasting solace.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2008
    Thank you Donavan, Blessings. L&P2u