The Face of Suffering
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Comment from jessizero
I am so sorry for your loss. You wrote this lovely tribute very well. It made me hurt for you, but I am glad your daughter is with Jesus. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I am so sorry for your loss. You wrote this lovely tribute very well. It made me hurt for you, but I am glad your daughter is with Jesus. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dear jessi. Amen. Blessings. Xo. B
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are beautiful, heartfelt, descriptive and creative. These
words brought me to tears. Thank you for the author's notes. I pondered on the poem and how letting go is just so difficult. This poem was gracefully written as I felt God was present at this difficult time.
With Sincere condolences and prayers....Maria
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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The author's words are beautiful, heartfelt, descriptive and creative. These
words brought me to tears. Thank you for the author's notes. I pondered on the poem and how letting go is just so difficult. This poem was gracefully written as I felt God was present at this difficult time.
With Sincere condolences and prayers....Maria
Comment Written 01-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, harmony for your kind caring. Blessings. Xo. B
Comment from irishauthorme
I cannot tell you the depth of my feelings for you, and your beloved daughter that you lost.
It was a real privilege for you to be with her in her last moments here on earth, and I share your belief that she is in a better place, free from pain and suffering.
I firmly believe that our loved ones watch over us from their place.
The little fog you saw when your daughter left you was the spirit of a loved one who had passed on before, come back to help your daughter cross over.
Someone will be there for you
Blessings, irish
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I cannot tell you the depth of my feelings for you, and your beloved daughter that you lost.
It was a real privilege for you to be with her in her last moments here on earth, and I share your belief that she is in a better place, free from pain and suffering.
I firmly believe that our loved ones watch over us from their place.
The little fog you saw when your daughter left you was the spirit of a loved one who had passed on before, come back to help your daughter cross over.
Someone will be there for you
Blessings, irish
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dear irish for your kindness. Blessings. Xo. B
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
This story always tugs at my heart, Barbara. To imagine climbing in bed with my son and holding him and singing to him until he passed absolutely wrenches my heart from my chest.
Should use a different text - background color combination. This one is very difficult to see.
P1, s4: (challenge) should be (challenging)
P2, s2: (grand children) should be (grandchildren) one word
P2, s2: Remove one period after (children) There are currently two
P2, s3: (great~granddaughter) should be (great-granddaughter) Hyphen versus a tilde. Tilde (~) is a keyboard symbol meaning about or approximately
P6, s2: Add a comma after (In fact)
The strength you had to muster to accomplish that impossible feat is unfathomable. Wonderful, heart wringing revelation.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This story always tugs at my heart, Barbara. To imagine climbing in bed with my son and holding him and singing to him until he passed absolutely wrenches my heart from my chest.
Should use a different text - background color combination. This one is very difficult to see.
P1, s4: (challenge) should be (challenging)
P2, s2: (grand children) should be (grandchildren) one word
P2, s2: Remove one period after (children) There are currently two
P2, s3: (great~granddaughter) should be (great-granddaughter) Hyphen versus a tilde. Tilde (~) is a keyboard symbol meaning about or approximately
P6, s2: Add a comma after (In fact)
The strength you had to muster to accomplish that impossible feat is unfathomable. Wonderful, heart wringing revelation.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dear Gary for caring. I hope you are feeling better. Blessings. Xo. B
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written very sad poem about the day your baby died. You used such heartfelt words. That had to be one of the hardest days of your life my friend. I am so sorry for your loss. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written very sad poem about the day your baby died. You used such heartfelt words. That had to be one of the hardest days of your life my friend. I am so sorry for your loss. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, dear Teri. Blessings, Xo. B
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Barbara, you have suffered an horrific loss that No mother should ever know or feel. Your poem reads and flows well, and the love that you had/have for your daughter shines bright from the depth of your heart.
Of special note:
I kept telling her, "Jesus is coming to take your hand
and walk with you on the beach."
(Barb, I'm sure Jesus took her hand, and today, your daughter has taken your hand as you begin anew.)
I see this poem was a contest winner, and it's easy to see why.
I leave my tear on this page. I hope that everything went well today.
Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Hi Barbara, you have suffered an horrific loss that No mother should ever know or feel. Your poem reads and flows well, and the love that you had/have for your daughter shines bright from the depth of your heart.
Of special note:
I kept telling her, "Jesus is coming to take your hand
and walk with you on the beach."
(Barb, I'm sure Jesus took her hand, and today, your daughter has taken your hand as you begin anew.)
I see this poem was a contest winner, and it's easy to see why.
I leave my tear on this page. I hope that everything went well today.
Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, dear M. as you know I have been very busy getting settled. Still am. God Bless you. Xo. B
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing that precious moment. Even though parents never want to say goodbye to children who precede them to Heaven, but that you were there and held her is such a beautiful thing. You were there to reassure her that Jesus will guide her Home.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing that precious moment. Even though parents never want to say goodbye to children who precede them to Heaven, but that you were there and held her is such a beautiful thing. You were there to reassure her that Jesus will guide her Home.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Helen. Amen. I was Blessed. Blessings to you. Xo. B
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem was well-written, Barbara, though heart-wrenching.
Your words were straight from your heart to hers. I could feel
your sadness and at the same time your happiness knowing Jesus
was there for her then and for always. This was a great tribute
to her, the family, and their faith, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Your poem was well-written, Barbara, though heart-wrenching.
Your words were straight from your heart to hers. I could feel
your sadness and at the same time your happiness knowing Jesus
was there for her then and for always. This was a great tribute
to her, the family, and their faith, too.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jan. Amen. Blessings. Xo, B
Comment from UNEASA64
Very powerful and moving. On the brighter side of life, you wrote a poem that won a contest, became Reconized, and an All Time Best. Hopefully all of that made her passing way easier.
I see no problems in this poem and hope your baby is in her happy place. Bye!
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Very powerful and moving. On the brighter side of life, you wrote a poem that won a contest, became Reconized, and an All Time Best. Hopefully all of that made her passing way easier.
I see no problems in this poem and hope your baby is in her happy place. Bye!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2011
Comment from prophetess
I'm so sorry to read about your daughters passing. This is a very touching poem. The love simply oozes from every word. A parents worst nightmare to out live a child. Thank you for sharing your love and your grief with us all here on FS. I hope you don't mind if I become a fan. I really want to read more of your work.
Prophetess
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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I'm so sorry to read about your daughters passing. This is a very touching poem. The love simply oozes from every word. A parents worst nightmare to out live a child. Thank you for sharing your love and your grief with us all here on FS. I hope you don't mind if I become a fan. I really want to read more of your work.
Prophetess
Comment Written 30-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Thank you and I hope I don't disappoint dear lady. I am honored. Blessings. Barbara
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You're welcome and I doubt you are capable of disappointing.
