Lady
Based on hits from the 80's, not another love song19 total reviews
Comment from unidian
And you hold what position in the campaign team :-) Nice to hear straight forward, 100% commitment, whatever the cause, whatever the dream. Well crafted!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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And you hold what position in the campaign team :-) Nice to hear straight forward, 100% commitment, whatever the cause, whatever the dream. Well crafted!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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LOL Not on the campaign team, I just know what she's done for us here in Alaska. She's very popular here. Thanks for the great review!
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is well-deserving of six stars ... you have used the titles well in this great piece. I love my Sarah...your lyrics are good and I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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This is well-deserving of six stars ... you have used the titles well in this great piece. I love my Sarah...your lyrics are good and I thoroughly enjoyed this read. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Wow! Thank you sooooo much for the 6 stars! I greatly appreciate your review and comments!
Comment from bluefly
Dovey, Great lyrics using all those song titles in a coherent and meaninful song. I don't want to get all political, but I am right there with you on McCain/Palin!
Great job! No nits to pick here.
Scott
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Dovey, Great lyrics using all those song titles in a coherent and meaninful song. I don't want to get all political, but I am right there with you on McCain/Palin!
Great job! No nits to pick here.
Scott
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Thanks so much! I'm really not a politically minded person, well, not usually! lol But she really hits home here!
Comment from rosemary30
nice poem, the message is so vivid, they are captivating . make the reader specially the american one to think twice whom there giving away their precious vote. i love the incorporation of some line of song that for surre we all know and remember the melody. i hope american will both wisely. goodluck
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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nice poem, the message is so vivid, they are captivating . make the reader specially the american one to think twice whom there giving away their precious vote. i love the incorporation of some line of song that for surre we all know and remember the melody. i hope american will both wisely. goodluck
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much for this kind review! :)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Dovey,
I enjoyed this poem and the love that you have for your
Alaskan Governor beams through. I'm not so sure which "hits" this poem is supposed to be based upon, but
you have to excuse me as the 80's are a blur to me--Too busy taking care of three babies left me a little out-of-touch in the pop-culture world.
However, I do recall the song, "Ebony and Ivory". It is a favorite of mine - lives together in perfect harmony. However, I'm not sure of the "context" of it in this poem and pray that it's no reference to race.
I'm sure that most people will agree that Sarah is a wonderful Governor, wife, mother, and Advocate for our Country. She is a woman to be proud of.
I'm so sorry that I was out of touch with the 80's tunes, etc. Because of that, much of the flow, I did not get.
I have not deducted any points for that because it's me.
Take care and keep writing.
Regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Hello Dovey,
I enjoyed this poem and the love that you have for your
Alaskan Governor beams through. I'm not so sure which "hits" this poem is supposed to be based upon, but
you have to excuse me as the 80's are a blur to me--Too busy taking care of three babies left me a little out-of-touch in the pop-culture world.
However, I do recall the song, "Ebony and Ivory". It is a favorite of mine - lives together in perfect harmony. However, I'm not sure of the "context" of it in this poem and pray that it's no reference to race.
I'm sure that most people will agree that Sarah is a wonderful Governor, wife, mother, and Advocate for our Country. She is a woman to be proud of.
I'm so sorry that I was out of touch with the 80's tunes, etc. Because of that, much of the flow, I did not get.
I have not deducted any points for that because it's me.
Take care and keep writing.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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No negative reference to race... I was playing off of the 'lives together in perfect harmony' as well. Thank you so much for the lengthy and kind review. :)
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Thanks for explaining ... I wasn't sure ... I thought I had to have had it wrong. I think Sarah Palin is wonderful. Go Alaska!
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from basic
hi
good luck in the contest
very good job
I'm familair with the songs because my daughter grew up
listening to them. Personally I like the 60's but you
manage to incorporate them nicely in your poem
I also support your candidate
basic
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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hi
good luck in the contest
very good job
I'm familair with the songs because my daughter grew up
listening to them. Personally I like the 60's but you
manage to incorporate them nicely in your poem
I also support your candidate
basic
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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I graduated in the mid 80's, so it was a natural for me to pick them as my decade for this contest. Thanks so much for this kind review. :)
Comment from dreaming
This was very well presented, with a terrific photo of Sarah Palin, who is becoming more well known down under than our own Prime Minister. She packs a huge punch and seems so fearless, great face to stand up against the enemy. Best of luck in the elections. We can't vote, only pray.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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This was very well presented, with a terrific photo of Sarah Palin, who is becoming more well known down under than our own Prime Minister. She packs a huge punch and seems so fearless, great face to stand up against the enemy. Best of luck in the elections. We can't vote, only pray.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much, we will take all the prayers we can get! :) I appreciate your review, stars, and comments!
Comment from Shari_K
Very well done poem with excellent song lyrics and titles as well. I think I know every song in here, shows my age ;) You did her proud in this poem and I commend you on the style and the work you put in with the song titles...very creative! Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest with this one!
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Very well done poem with excellent song lyrics and titles as well. I think I know every song in here, shows my age ;) You did her proud in this poem and I commend you on the style and the work you put in with the song titles...very creative! Excellent poem! Good luck in the contest with this one!
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much for this enthusiastic review, the stars, and the comments! :)
Comment from adewpearl
Dovey, one of the great things about our country is that we can disagree freely, and boy, I couldn't disagree more if I really put effort into it, but this is a poetry review, and you express yourself clearly, with conviction, with passion,
and your poem has a good rhythm and interesting rhymes. Those are the things that get you my five. :-) Of course, my disagreement is about McCain/Palin, not about your last verse!!!
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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Dovey, one of the great things about our country is that we can disagree freely, and boy, I couldn't disagree more if I really put effort into it, but this is a poetry review, and you express yourself clearly, with conviction, with passion,
and your poem has a good rhythm and interesting rhymes. Those are the things that get you my five. :-) Of course, my disagreement is about McCain/Palin, not about your last verse!!!
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2008
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I think we've had this discussion before lol I appreciate the review and the stars. Maybe you would get a chuckle out of the shirt my husband bought today... the slogan read...
Our Mama is better than your Obama! (Over the outline of the state of Alaska.)
Honestly, I chose her as my topic for the contest, because otherwise, it would have been just another sappy love or love gone wrong song... what else was there in the '80's? lol
And frankly, as far as Obama goes, with the state of the world today, his Muslim ties scare me too much to even entertain voting for him.
Thanks again! :)
