The Mermaid and the Octopus
A children's story teaching about other cultures32 total reviews
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
Well done, the story is a unique twist on the picture, and is extremely well written with no errors. It is refreshing that it wasn't a story about dragons, though the title of the painting is, your artistic license, and the abstract nature of the painting work well together. i doubt someone would tell Picasso, it doesn't fit the description, art, and poetry is an ar form of the highest order, iis best when constantly reinterpretated and given new meaning, and this what you have so excellently done - you chose imagination over stipulation, and in this particlar instance, given the degree of artistry presented in the work, imagintion trumped the stipulation card. Art is alive and is in constant flux, forever changing, you did well. enjoyed the piece.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
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Well done, the story is a unique twist on the picture, and is extremely well written with no errors. It is refreshing that it wasn't a story about dragons, though the title of the painting is, your artistic license, and the abstract nature of the painting work well together. i doubt someone would tell Picasso, it doesn't fit the description, art, and poetry is an ar form of the highest order, iis best when constantly reinterpretated and given new meaning, and this what you have so excellently done - you chose imagination over stipulation, and in this particlar instance, given the degree of artistry presented in the work, imagintion trumped the stipulation card. Art is alive and is in constant flux, forever changing, you did well. enjoyed the piece.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
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Thank you for your extremely kind review. I greatly appreciate it.
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Pleasure was mine, I assure you.
Comment from FindYourPath
It is good i actually read it to my sister after i read it again she seemed to enjoy it i look forward to reading more the flow was good and i didnt see any grammar mistakes it looks like you took the time to proof read and perfect but im deffinetly not the one to ask.
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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
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It is good i actually read it to my sister after i read it again she seemed to enjoy it i look forward to reading more the flow was good and i didnt see any grammar mistakes it looks like you took the time to proof read and perfect but im deffinetly not the one to ask.
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Comment Written 25-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
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Thanks for a good review. Out of curiosity, is your sister a child? If so, how old is she?
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Yeah she is 7 im doubt she really got all of it but i mean it is still something that kept her attention i have a peice out right now i dont post alot or read alot but its kinda something i want people to read but i dont have the member dollars to by pump ups or anything like that the reason im reviewing if you ever have time i would appreciate it if you would take a look at it tell some friends if you like it.
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What particular work(s) would you like me to review?
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If you would take a look at the last one Dont Cry feel free to read the others they seem to have a similar flow to them same topic love sucks kinda thing.
