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The Cyber Space Garden

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Holly Blue Pods"
The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,

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Comment from Broken Fingers
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Hi
I like your concept here and will look out for further book entries. A "jittney" that made me laugh...exquisite descriptive style here.
Gavin (Mr H)

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008


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    Humble Thanks, mr haverstock
Comment from Rajasir
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A beautiful Haiku you have presented , my friend.The form is perfect and the diction is quite precise to match with the subject.
Good work
Bless you,
Rajasir

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008


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    Humble thanks, Rajasir
Comment from Russ Smitheram
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Enjoyable poem. No revisions required. Well written and Well structured. I like the fantasy concept.

Keep up the good work

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2008


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    Humble thanks, Jack Scrumpy