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Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

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A collection of poetry.

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Comment from Aleksandramarie
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oooooh, moody consistent, great imagery...

what a nice little piece...I have always loved the word 'cacophony' but question the sound of it in this piece... as well as I have always imagined it as disorganized racket, which doesn't seem to fit the piece?

but still loved this anyways....thanks, msp

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2008


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
    love and loss is a disorganize racket... thus cacophony. Thank you so very much for the wonderful rating and taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from S.Yocom
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You have written a very poignant poem of love and loss, in the guise of a nighttime storm. This poem has nice imagery. I especially like the line, "And the cold wind sighs." Well done.
Sally


 Comment Written 30-Mar-2008


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
    Thank you for such a wonderful review!
Comment from Paradox Tremors
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I enjoyed this very, very, much. Well written piece that has a good structure and a easy flow to follow. I saw neither a misspelled word or anything screaming out to be fixed. Thanks so much for sharing...

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2008


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
    Thank you, Paradox, for such a wonderful review!