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A collection of poetry.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Aleksandramarie
oooooh, moody consistent, great imagery...
what a nice little piece...I have always loved the word 'cacophony' but question the sound of it in this piece... as well as I have always imagined it as disorganized racket, which doesn't seem to fit the piece?
but still loved this anyways....thanks, msp
Comment Written 30-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
love and loss is a disorganize racket... thus cacophony. Thank you so very much for the wonderful rating and taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from
S.Yocom
You have written a very poignant poem of love and loss, in the guise of a nighttime storm. This poem has nice imagery. I especially like the line, "And the cold wind sighs." Well done.
Sally
Comment Written 30-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
Thank you for such a wonderful review!
Comment from
Paradox Tremors
I enjoyed this very, very, much. Well written piece that has a good structure and a easy flow to follow. I saw neither a misspelled word or anything screaming out to be fixed. Thanks so much for sharing...
Comment Written 30-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2008
Thank you, Paradox, for such a wonderful review!
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