Easter's Bunny
Why he's so special48 total reviews
Comment from Maguy Daoud
Hello, nice to meet you.
I really like the way you describe this rabbit, the poem has fun and learn in the same time and it's easy to memorized by children.
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Hello, nice to meet you.
I really like the way you describe this rabbit, the poem has fun and learn in the same time and it's easy to memorized by children.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2013
Comment from kathy77
That was adorable. (I know, I'm out of season) I'll have to come back around Easter and read this to my 5 year old! Thank you so much! I also liked all the various colors you used.
Kathy
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That was adorable. (I know, I'm out of season) I'll have to come back around Easter and read this to my 5 year old! Thank you so much! I also liked all the various colors you used.
Kathy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2008
Comment from Perp Ihebom
A very entertaining poem for children. Everything about it is designed to thrill young minds and make reading a delight. The colours in the text are beautiful and endearing. The rhymes make for easy reading and memorizing. J
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A very entertaining poem for children. Everything about it is designed to thrill young minds and make reading a delight. The colours in the text are beautiful and endearing. The rhymes make for easy reading and memorizing. J
Comment Written 09-Sep-2008
Comment from sheilamarie
Really cute poem, Helvi2! I'd love to see the moves you do with it!
Your rhythm and rhyme scheme work well for his lighthearted ramp.
sheilamarie
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Really cute poem, Helvi2! I'd love to see the moves you do with it!
Your rhythm and rhyme scheme work well for his lighthearted ramp.
sheilamarie
Comment Written 11-Jul-2008
Comment from grassroots08
This was cuter than a, well a bunny's ear. So colorful and picture perfect, I enjoyed this little hop though your imagination. Good luck finding all the eggs. grassroots08
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This was cuter than a, well a bunny's ear. So colorful and picture perfect, I enjoyed this little hop though your imagination. Good luck finding all the eggs. grassroots08
Comment Written 05-May-2008
Comment from MissCheerful
I like it- it has great rhyme. You used a lot of words that really helped show who the bunny is and what he looks like. But, maybe watch punctuation within the poem as if your thoughts are real sentences.
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I like it- it has great rhyme. You used a lot of words that really helped show who the bunny is and what he looks like. But, maybe watch punctuation within the poem as if your thoughts are real sentences.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2008
Comment from Bellydanser
This is really clever and fun, Helvi2. The presentation is quite adorable. and the subject is perfect for kids. Your meter is perfect, though the rhymes are not all true rhymes. The only real issue I would have as poetry for children is the phrase "adorn anticipation's face." The wording seems a little over a child's head. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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This is really clever and fun, Helvi2. The presentation is quite adorable. and the subject is perfect for kids. Your meter is perfect, though the rhymes are not all true rhymes. The only real issue I would have as poetry for children is the phrase "adorn anticipation's face." The wording seems a little over a child's head. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Hi Belly,
I'm so glad you enjoyed my childrens poem for Easter. :o) I understand how you feel about, "adorn anticipation's face." I'll see if there is some other way I can express it. I did have some slant rhymes in the poem. I liked the way it bounced along. I appreciate the fact you really had your eyes open when you read the poem. It makes your review mean even more. :o) Thanks for letting me know.
Bless You,
Helvi :o)
Comment from Judian James
"His ears are big and FlOpPy and his nose is colored blue
And every time he WiGgLeS it, it turns a different hue" I loved that! Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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"His ears are big and FlOpPy and his nose is colored blue
And every time he WiGgLeS it, it turns a different hue" I loved that! Well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Hi Judian, Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed my little Easter Bunny. I was hoping everyone would have a little fun with this poem. I love to send out smiles and I'm so happy you received one. Thanks so much for the review. Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from Nanny 6
This is remarkable! Not only does it flow with ease, the creativity is spectacualr. Very colorful and a great read for children. Good luck in the contest. Judy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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This is remarkable! Not only does it flow with ease, the creativity is spectacualr. Very colorful and a great read for children. Good luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2008
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Hi Judy, Gosh! Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed my take on the Easter Bunny. I didn't win the contest, but I did get seven sixes and that has never happened. When I do get sixes on a poem the most I ever got was three. I'm very happy everyone enjoyed it so much.Thank you so much for the six stars. I really am honored to receive it. God Bless You, Helvi :o)
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Six stars last longer than a win! What an honor to receive that many. I am very happy for you. God bless you. Judy
Comment from carolm5415
Super duper I love it! I can see your bunny. You put so much fun into this, changing fonts and colors, capitalization etc. Kids will just love reading this or having it read to them. PS - I am bi-polar and on medication but no more shrinks for me. Been there, done that and got nothing out of it. All chemical imbalance and I'm doing just fine. Good luck to you and KEEP ON WRITING. You are a winner!!!!
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Super duper I love it! I can see your bunny. You put so much fun into this, changing fonts and colors, capitalization etc. Kids will just love reading this or having it read to them. PS - I am bi-polar and on medication but no more shrinks for me. Been there, done that and got nothing out of it. All chemical imbalance and I'm doing just fine. Good luck to you and KEEP ON WRITING. You are a winner!!!!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2008
