The Cyber Space Garden
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Garden of Neptune Flowers"The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,
7 total reviews
Comment from Simona Stratulat
Love it! So simple! So clear! I remember of a fantasy garden drawing contest in the past and I entered it with my idea of cyber flowers!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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Love it! So simple! So clear! I remember of a fantasy garden drawing contest in the past and I entered it with my idea of cyber flowers!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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You see the mind can work wonders, when you're having fun, Simona. Thank You.
Comment from Janilou
It is a beautiful flower and a wonderful poem. Sometimes when I am having trouble falling asleep, I ask God to carry me on a journey through the wonders of His universe and this poem reminded me of that. Nothing I can see that needs changing. Excellent work.
Jan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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It is a beautiful flower and a wonderful poem. Sometimes when I am having trouble falling asleep, I ask God to carry me on a journey through the wonders of His universe and this poem reminded me of that. Nothing I can see that needs changing. Excellent work.
Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, janilou
Comment from mancub
your poem is beautiful I like how you put this together, you have a beautiful poem with a lot of feeling and heart, the imagery here flows through the readers mind created by your words, the picture you chose compliments this well and help to bring the feel of this to life, very nice job my friend, Take care, thank you for sharing, Mancub
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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your poem is beautiful I like how you put this together, you have a beautiful poem with a lot of feeling and heart, the imagery here flows through the readers mind created by your words, the picture you chose compliments this well and help to bring the feel of this to life, very nice job my friend, Take care, thank you for sharing, Mancub
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, mancub
Comment from rhymer1
The idea of your trip is delightful. I am not overly impressed with the idea of having illustrations presented with poems. The poems should create their own visuals, and often the illustrations suppress my imagination and I lose the personal visuals that the words would otherwise trigger in me. However, in the case of your cyber-trip, they work well. The one with this poem is especially beautiful. Slainte, rhymer1
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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The idea of your trip is delightful. I am not overly impressed with the idea of having illustrations presented with poems. The poems should create their own visuals, and often the illustrations suppress my imagination and I lose the personal visuals that the words would otherwise trigger in me. However, in the case of your cyber-trip, they work well. The one with this poem is especially beautiful. Slainte, rhymer1
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, rhymer1
Comment from Sleep
Hi Lynar,
A simply beautiful piece of work supported by a simply stunning image
Why is it that I just really need the adress of this place.
A great piece of writing this and with lines like:
"It's a place where true peace and tranquility is undisturbed."
Just tell me when the next one is written!
Regards,
Sleep.......................
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Hi Lynar,
A simply beautiful piece of work supported by a simply stunning image
Why is it that I just really need the adress of this place.
A great piece of writing this and with lines like:
"It's a place where true peace and tranquility is undisturbed."
Just tell me when the next one is written!
Regards,
Sleep.......................
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, Sleep
Comment from Annmuma
the flower is springtime personified! Beautiful. Great verse, presenation, structure, flow--I see nothing to criticize or suggest changing. Good job. ann
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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the flower is springtime personified! Beautiful. Great verse, presenation, structure, flow--I see nothing to criticize or suggest changing. Good job. ann
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, Ammuma
Comment from the_desolate_one
Great... you incorporate a lot of different ideas... nature, the universe intertwined within one another... i really enjoyed it much.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Great... you incorporate a lot of different ideas... nature, the universe intertwined within one another... i really enjoyed it much.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, the desolate one.