Misty Morn
down memory lane...22 total reviews
Comment from sweetcaroline
Starkat, the theme for this poem is so different to the one I have just rated.
Shows that you have got talent.
I could almost feel as if I was there.
Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2008
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Starkat, the theme for this poem is so different to the one I have just rated.
Shows that you have got talent.
I could almost feel as if I was there.
Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2008
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Thanks for stopping by to review, Misty Morn. Glad you could picture yourself in this scene. I appreciate the comments...;-)
Comment from kiwi bloke
Hi there STARKAT
Congratulations on wining this contest, and very deserving it is to with such a picturesque poem stirring ones emotions of remembered scenes gone and anticipation of the ones yet to arrive.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008
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Hi there STARKAT
Congratulations on wining this contest, and very deserving it is to with such a picturesque poem stirring ones emotions of remembered scenes gone and anticipation of the ones yet to arrive.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008
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Thanks for the review, and congrats., kiwi bloke. I appreciate the comments...;-)
Comment from Senyai
An absolutely lovely poem, deserving of the first place win in the contest, Starkat. Congratulations! Soft, delicate, and soothing verse, to go with a picture that tells of the same emotional pull.
"Morning mist tiptoes through the blush of dawn,
depositing dewdrops on fields and lawn.
Tall grass riffles from a whispering breeze,
that also ruffles tree branches and leaves.
Memories of lilacs and lavender
drift across dusty roads I remember.
Past fields and farmlands these roads curve and comb,
taking my heart down the paths that lead home."
Perfect word choice, beat and rhyme. But most of all the message is so dear.
Bravo!
Take care,
Foxey
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2008
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An absolutely lovely poem, deserving of the first place win in the contest, Starkat. Congratulations! Soft, delicate, and soothing verse, to go with a picture that tells of the same emotional pull.
"Morning mist tiptoes through the blush of dawn,
depositing dewdrops on fields and lawn.
Tall grass riffles from a whispering breeze,
that also ruffles tree branches and leaves.
Memories of lilacs and lavender
drift across dusty roads I remember.
Past fields and farmlands these roads curve and comb,
taking my heart down the paths that lead home."
Perfect word choice, beat and rhyme. But most of all the message is so dear.
Bravo!
Take care,
Foxey
Comment Written 15-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2008
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Glad you enjoyed it, Foxey. It's been a thrill to actually win a 'Site' contest. I appreciate all your wonderful comments..;>)
Be well, be creative...be you
starkat
Comment from Prismgate
I LOVE this! Wonderful descriptions match the picture perfect. This reminded me so much of my childhood on my aunt's farm. I could almost smell the lilacs again. Thanks for the beautiful memory.
--Prismgate
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2008
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I LOVE this! Wonderful descriptions match the picture perfect. This reminded me so much of my childhood on my aunt's farm. I could almost smell the lilacs again. Thanks for the beautiful memory.
--Prismgate
Comment Written 15-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2008
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Again, thanks for the great review, and I'm thrilled with the 'sixer'. It really brightened the day...:-) I'm happy the poem brought you some wonderful memories..
Be well, be creative...be you
starkat
Comment from kassey
This is a very good entry into the contest, which I should add i have already entered. Your imagery is great for the piicture given, I have seen many poems on the site for this particular contest and I think there are a lot of strong contenders, Good luck Kay
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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This is a very good entry into the contest, which I should add i have already entered. Your imagery is great for the piicture given, I have seen many poems on the site for this particular contest and I think there are a lot of strong contenders, Good luck Kay
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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Thanks for reviewing, Kay. I've only see a couple of poems for this contest...I'll be sure to check yours out. I appreciate your comments...;-)
Comment from Earthwriter
Very solid entry into this contest i like your use of imagery and i feel this piece has a smooth flow to it thanks for sharing Monte
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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Very solid entry into this contest i like your use of imagery and i feel this piece has a smooth flow to it thanks for sharing Monte
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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Thanks for the review, Monte. I appreciate the comments...;)
Comment from Lady & Louis
Lovely poem, Sir Starkitty! The second verse in particular is striking, with "memories of lilac and lavender" - it's very apt for the colours of that image, and the whole mood of the piece fits it perfectly.
Good luck in the contest!
Mrs Queen :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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Lovely poem, Sir Starkitty! The second verse in particular is striking, with "memories of lilac and lavender" - it's very apt for the colours of that image, and the whole mood of the piece fits it perfectly.
Good luck in the contest!
Mrs Queen :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2008
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Hello Mrs. Queen. Thanks for the great review! Glad you enjoyed my take on the contest artwork. I appreciate the comments...;)
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Starkat. This is a beautiful piece of well written poetry in which you have incorporated the artwork effectively. I learned a new word, ie, riffles. I enjoyed your imagery and excelent aliteration. Good luck
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Hi Starkat. This is a beautiful piece of well written poetry in which you have incorporated the artwork effectively. I learned a new word, ie, riffles. I enjoyed your imagery and excelent aliteration. Good luck
Comment Written 18-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Glad you enjoyed it, Wendyanne. Thanks for the great review...;-)
Comment from fastdigits
The start of your piece immediately
puts the reader into a gentle feeling
of the quietude of the misty morning
through the blush of dawn. That line sets
the whole visual image up of this short
but beautiful rendition depicting the picture
in confines with the rules of this contest.
Good luck
Well done
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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The start of your piece immediately
puts the reader into a gentle feeling
of the quietude of the misty morning
through the blush of dawn. That line sets
the whole visual image up of this short
but beautiful rendition depicting the picture
in confines with the rules of this contest.
Good luck
Well done
Comment Written 18-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Thanks for the great review. Glad you enjoyed this poem...;)
Comment from marswolf
"Morning mist tiptoes through the blush of dawn,
depositing dewdrops on fields and lawn."
I just fell in love with this image....
What a magical scene you painted in this piece
"Memories of lilac and lavender"
This was a joy to read !
I think you captured the image beautifully...
Best of luck to you my friend....
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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"Morning mist tiptoes through the blush of dawn,
depositing dewdrops on fields and lawn."
I just fell in love with this image....
What a magical scene you painted in this piece
"Memories of lilac and lavender"
This was a joy to read !
I think you captured the image beautifully...
Best of luck to you my friend....
Comment Written 18-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2008
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Glad you enjoyed it, mars. Thanks for the great review! ...;-)