The Cyber Space Garden
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Orange Finger-like Flowers"The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,
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Comment from Alan K Pease
A interesting free verse poem of merit. Did you have the poem in mine when you saw the picture or was it other way around. Both are effective together. Enjoy your journey in cyberspace.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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A interesting free verse poem of merit. Did you have the poem in mine when you saw the picture or was it other way around. Both are effective together. Enjoy your journey in cyberspace.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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I write the poem then I look for the flowers to match.
Thank you for the review, Alan K Pease
Comment from samandlancelot
This is very nice. I pictured hands motioning onlookers to come closer to see and appreciate the beauty. Well done! Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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This is very nice. I pictured hands motioning onlookers to come closer to see and appreciate the beauty. Well done! Patricia
Comment Written 26-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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My humble Thanks, samandlancelot
Comment from adewpearl
Your three line poem is most vividly descriptive, Lynar - I love the alliteration and the visuals your descriptions conjure in my mind :-) This is quite lovely and cheerful in mood. Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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Your three line poem is most vividly descriptive, Lynar - I love the alliteration and the visuals your descriptions conjure in my mind :-) This is quite lovely and cheerful in mood. Brooke
Comment Written 26-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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My humble thanks, Brooke
Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was a delightful piece of poetry to read short very powerful, I thought the picture was fantastic it also represented the contents of what was described in words. I liked it and richly enjoyed reading. Well done no errors of mistakes Alexander
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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I thought this was a delightful piece of poetry to read short very powerful, I thought the picture was fantastic it also represented the contents of what was described in words. I liked it and richly enjoyed reading. Well done no errors of mistakes Alexander
Comment Written 26-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2010
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Yes, the artwork on Fanstory was the perfect match
for my poetry. Thank You, Booklyn POet QQ
Comment from kintesiegel
this is an interesting poem with unusual imagery that kind of takes my breath away. I love the picture and the idea of the finger-like flowres.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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this is an interesting poem with unusual imagery that kind of takes my breath away. I love the picture and the idea of the finger-like flowres.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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Humble thanks, kintesiegel
Comment from MikiB
On Venus I see, orange, finger-like flowers that attracts Butterflies. Of course they do! Very good poem about the plant. Lovely picture too, that goes with it.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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On Venus I see, orange, finger-like flowers that attracts Butterflies. Of course they do! Very good poem about the plant. Lovely picture too, that goes with it.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2010
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Humble thanks, MikiB
Comment from Just2Write
Great poem and excellent presentation. I really liked this work. It is perfect as presented and I find nothing that needs to be fixed or changed.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2008
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Great poem and excellent presentation. I really liked this work. It is perfect as presented and I find nothing that needs to be fixed or changed.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, 2Flower
Comment from sherrymccall
This is a short poem, but sweet. I like the observation that takes place in the solitude of the mind. The picture is very pretty that you chose. sherry
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2008
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This is a short poem, but sweet. I like the observation that takes place in the solitude of the mind. The picture is very pretty that you chose. sherry
Comment Written 29-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, sherrymccall
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You are so welcome. Sherry
Comment from Artasylum
well that is a fact i never knew...those are things that make me go hmmmm...what is that all about...who cares...they are just so beautiful to look at...yours, diana.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2008
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well that is a fact i never knew...those are things that make me go hmmmm...what is that all about...who cares...they are just so beautiful to look at...yours, diana.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2008
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Humble Thanks, Artasylum