Ballerina of Snow ~ Cascade Art #1
Read notes on how to read~ Cascade Art Poem,29 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi, Oh I loved this dance done by your lovely ballerina.
She shall dance on my windows tonight, what a delightful picture to behold. Very clever,
thank you for the notes.
Gert
Hello Helvi, Oh I loved this dance done by your lovely ballerina.
She shall dance on my windows tonight, what a delightful picture to behold. Very clever,
thank you for the notes.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Feb-2008
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I really liked how you did this. I was in painting class last year and did a really cool balerina painting. It looks really bad but I still like it.
I really liked how you did this. I was in painting class last year and did a really cool balerina painting. It looks really bad but I still like it.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2008
Comment from butterfly4265
I loved this. It's very cute and clever ~ I have never seen one like this before. It looks difficult to do but you have done a wonderful job. Very magical and also very much enjoyed.
I loved this. It's very cute and clever ~ I have never seen one like this before. It looks difficult to do but you have done a wonderful job. Very magical and also very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2008
Comment from serenityjs
I liked this poem. I have never seen one quite like this and I am sure it took some time to complete. Thanks for showing me a new way of doing things.
I liked this poem. I have never seen one quite like this and I am sure it took some time to complete. Thanks for showing me a new way of doing things.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2008
Comment from S.Yocom
This is clever. Yes, the poem does look like the ballerina dancing. Nicely done. For a similar poem, you might like to read my poem, "Hula," which is in my portfolio, in Chapter 40 of my book, "Fun with Poetry." It is fun to try new things, isn't it?
Sally
This is clever. Yes, the poem does look like the ballerina dancing. Nicely done. For a similar poem, you might like to read my poem, "Hula," which is in my portfolio, in Chapter 40 of my book, "Fun with Poetry." It is fun to try new things, isn't it?
Sally
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
Comment from ledford
Great job!! I am so impressed that you were able to do this. The editor must really like you:-)
Keep up the great work!
Great job!! I am so impressed that you were able to do this. The editor must really like you:-)
Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
Comment from Artasylum
its funny...since i am a visual artist this is cute and i did enjoy your fonty twists and turns...looking forward to more..thanks for the dance...yours, diana
its funny...since i am a visual artist this is cute and i did enjoy your fonty twists and turns...looking forward to more..thanks for the dance...yours, diana
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
Comment from bard owl
Wow. This poem must have taken a lot of time and work. The idea is very charming. I love the idea of ballerinas dancing on the window sill. Excellent imagery and mechanics here. bard owl
Wow. This poem must have taken a lot of time and work. The idea is very charming. I love the idea of ballerinas dancing on the window sill. Excellent imagery and mechanics here. bard owl
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
Comment from amada
I can see exactly what you draw, congratulations. Your talent and ingenuity are just great. The artwork and lines dance at unison. Congrats.
I can see exactly what you draw, congratulations. Your talent and ingenuity are just great. The artwork and lines dance at unison. Congrats.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
Comment from Judian James
Well done ... just exactly how did you do it?? Anyway, it's clever and also poetic. I enjoyed it very much. Swirling, twirling snowflakes are coming tonight!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2008
Well done ... just exactly how did you do it?? Anyway, it's clever and also poetic. I enjoyed it very much. Swirling, twirling snowflakes are coming tonight!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2008
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Graph paper! It helps immensely. I've tried to do this before without a guide and it was impossible. This year I finally mastered (sort of anyways) the microsoft spread sheet. I can actually see what I'm doing. I always write the poem first ,then write it out on the graph. The graph allows you to create cells that fit the font and gives you a center to work from. I try to keep the poems short because some of your work is going to be vertical and I don't want to create a huge scroll. The drawback of writng this way is you have to re-write it on microsoft word, this is where your graph becomes a huge asset because it solves your spacing issues.... The worst part of all of this is "The Editor". It is friend and foe ( though mostly FOE) The editor is a vicious word and letter manipulator that can destroy your hard work in seconds, as you are well aware. I was lucky to escape with my life. ..... Anyways.., I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and the art. Thanks so much for the great review.... I think I'm going to lie down now. LOL Helvi :o)