Of Comfort, Care, and Candlelight
Jazzeree: Enduring love between parents and child65 total reviews
Comment from Ima Humanbean
This was an extremely heartfelt write dear. I was immediately grabbed by the emotion early on in the poem. You chose your artchoice well. Excellent.
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This was an extremely heartfelt write dear. I was immediately grabbed by the emotion early on in the poem. You chose your artchoice well. Excellent.
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
This is a well-written tribute to your mother, KT. As always your poetry is poignant and inspiring. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
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This is a well-written tribute to your mother, KT. As always your poetry is poignant and inspiring. Thanks for sharing your feelings with us.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from smiles_with_sunshine
>>>M>r>s>.>>K>t>>>
I'm sorry for your loss. As my mother is aging, she has in some ways become more childlike in her behavior...even in her appearance. It's hard to watch as her vitality wanes.
Your writing is exceptional and a pleasure to read.
Take care Mrs. KT and "be" blessed.
:)s* smiles
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>>>M>r>s>.>>K>t>>>
I'm sorry for your loss. As my mother is aging, she has in some ways become more childlike in her behavior...even in her appearance. It's hard to watch as her vitality wanes.
Your writing is exceptional and a pleasure to read.
Take care Mrs. KT and "be" blessed.
:)s* smiles
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Stephy Jemmisparks
i am saddened to hear your story.She is in Paradise. I hope you will be comforted by your pen.Yes_ a lot of times we wish the truth was just a nightmare. May The good Shepherd Comfort you.
Stephy
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i am saddened to hear your story.She is in Paradise. I hope you will be comforted by your pen.Yes_ a lot of times we wish the truth was just a nightmare. May The good Shepherd Comfort you.
Stephy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Scarlettdreams
What a lovely piece this is. It sounds like you were a wonderful caretaker. smiles. That is most difficult sometimes. Hugs...Dani
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What a lovely piece this is. It sounds like you were a wonderful caretaker. smiles. That is most difficult sometimes. Hugs...Dani
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from kassey
This one really hit the spot for me. I was diagnosed with Parkinsons' 12 years ago. It is becoming an uphill struggle. Luckily I do not have dementia, or rather, if I do everyone is keeping it secret. bearing in mind that I have the fear of that happening The line that was most significant to me was
"we eased your fears and all laughed".
Thank you for sharing it, your words were excellent
Kay
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This one really hit the spot for me. I was diagnosed with Parkinsons' 12 years ago. It is becoming an uphill struggle. Luckily I do not have dementia, or rather, if I do everyone is keeping it secret. bearing in mind that I have the fear of that happening The line that was most significant to me was
"we eased your fears and all laughed".
Thank you for sharing it, your words were excellent
Kay
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Mike K2
I felt that this was a very touching and caring poem, I easily identified with this as I have provided comfort to those between worlds. I especially enjoyed the last lines that remind us to remained tempered as we too may need help. Beautiful!
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I felt that this was a very touching and caring poem, I easily identified with this as I have provided comfort to those between worlds. I especially enjoyed the last lines that remind us to remained tempered as we too may need help. Beautiful!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Pili Pubul
I Identify so deeply with this poem and its meaning, my mother had strokes that slowly took her into dementia , and the roles reversed, she called my Mom in her last three years.
It is such great sensitivity in the images that your words created, and so much truth !
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I Identify so deeply with this poem and its meaning, my mother had strokes that slowly took her into dementia , and the roles reversed, she called my Mom in her last three years.
It is such great sensitivity in the images that your words created, and so much truth !
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from Teri7
You did a very good job on this poem. Your comments were good also. I went through the same with my mom. She ended up with cancer and she regressed back into a younger day. Love, Teri
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You did a very good job on this poem. Your comments were good also. I went through the same with my mom. She ended up with cancer and she regressed back into a younger day. Love, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
Comment from TwinkleToesSandHarp
What a beautifully touching poem. It is both humbeling and amazing how life can come full circle. Your poem takes us through such a moment. Thank you for sharing.
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What a beautifully touching poem. It is both humbeling and amazing how life can come full circle. Your poem takes us through such a moment. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2008
