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Reflections For The New Day

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Comment from jeana
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I liked your poem It is sometimes difficult to find our way and recognize our song which you have stated so eloquently. You passages provide a guiding light back to where we the lost souls need to be. It is the musical light within we should seek. This is a wonderful read. jeana

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2007
    awww, thank you dear soul!
Comment from mtngalofnc
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Hi Jewell,
A total joy to be blessed with the gift of music and the confidence to build upon that gift where hope and joy comfort.
Thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!

mtngalofnc

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 22-Dec-2007
    Yeh? Thank you! God bless you!
Comment from diane24
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Where hope is the pillow
and joy the comforter

This is a lovely poem and as usual
you have shown how talented you are
by writing these one after another. I
can only wish. diane

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Hey! It's YOU again! hehe. Thank you for stoppin' in for a visit!
    A spot o' tea? Or wouldja like some vunderbar coffee darling?
    A little cream a little sugar and some gossip if ya please?
Comment from LarkSong
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Yes, sing, sing, sing! Hi ya JJ--Oh, how I love references to music...isn't it the most perfect gift? I especially enjoyed the final stanza, with it "comforting" lullaby connection; beautiful writing, yet again, sweetie pie.

Holiday hugs,
Lark

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Hi dearie. You know? I had to go back and read this again, for the reviews have suprised me. I thought it to be a simple little poem and it came forth like a smile from a playful child. Guess what! I like it too! haha...God bless you for your continued support!
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
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Oh I like this one, Jewell. Beautiful message on display. Sorry I've not been around. Was in one of my funks I guess. Hope you are well. Hugs, JL

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Thanks sweety. I'm glad you liked this too.
Comment from Judian James
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This is lovely Jewell. The presentation is really good ... not only the artwork but the layout of verses is very attractive too.
I adore the entire second stanza! Well done

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Hi Jude! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one!
Comment from Jer4Clarity
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Jewell,

Captivating. Warm. Loving. Endearing. Romantic. Encouraging. Inspiring. This poem has such a wonderful song in its message.

Jerry

PS

Wanna Skype?

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Hey Jer, I tried to reach you last evening. But so tired, I just went ni nite early at 11 pm! haha. I appreciate you dear friend.
Comment from babylonia
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very nice. easy to read and follow. stanzas are well written. imagery is excellent. the picture is nice. i really like the background colors. feeling of comfort flows from this one. keep up the good work~

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Hi bab. So glad you enjoyed this. I love these colors too.
reply by babylonia on 19-Dec-2007
    you are welcome~
    have a great day~
    babylonia
Comment from Mike K2
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But those verses are an enjoyable challenge to create. I love this poem which is a melody in and of itself that I find is well written and high spirited.
I also enjoyed the last stanza and will not suggest that you add, "...and companionship is his two cats and a dog used as a heat source." I really enjoyed this one.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    loved the ending of your reivew too. lol
Comment from S.Yocom
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It is a great and wonderful thing to be confident and sure of oneself. Then one can sleep without care and wake with joy. You wrote of it very well. Nicely done.
Sally

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2007


reply by the author on 19-Dec-2007
    Thanks Sally