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The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,

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Comment from thedreampeddler
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Just who exactly is the true creator? I'm not sure if there is a claim to know here, or rather just a life guideline type of thing. please enlighten me if you can.
other than that the writing wasn't bad.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
    Just think look at all the stars who created them? Sometimes when nothing else in life works, where would you turn for further guidance? Thinking about the order of our planet there is someone who has created all these things. An architect creates a house but God has created the heaven and earth and mankind. If we apply his guidance through prayer, watch what happens. It's always positive and not negative in experience. Doing so helps us to be better neighbors and friends. Thanks, thedreampeddler.--Hebrews 3:4 and Isaiah 40:26.
Comment from Charlene0513
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To Lynar,
When we seek the Master's guidance and protection from any storm or trial in life we are actually exposing our definite need for Him and then it allows Jesus the right to intercede
and bring us His eternal love, peace and joy within our hearts.
Charlene

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
    Many thanks, Charlene
Comment from kiwijenny
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Everyday we are faced with decisions. Shawn learned through the hard knocks of life, to look to the true Creator for guidance. In the spiritual light of truth, that brought him success.
Yay good decision...it's where I went to with quaint logic
God bless

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
    Humble Thanks, kiwijenny
Comment from lythampoet
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Got me thinking again have I read it all. Quote Peggy Lee ??is that all there is???
Short no point maybe that is your point? Is this poetry? Or just a statement?

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2007

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2007
    This poem is in Cinquain style. I would like you to reconsider your review of my poetry. lythampoet (please do a little research), Thanks.
Comment from Honus X Heppablatte
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Yeah, all right.I'm not sure if this is a poem so much as an exclamation point.Ambiguous and full of precious life.Enjoyed it immensley.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2007

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2007
    Humble Thanks. It's Cinquain poetry.
Comment from FamilyWriter
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This is the type of writing that causes me to go back and think - thus showing the real talent of the poet.

You have a unique picture to go with unique words that allow me to explore my mind.


 Comment Written 31-Oct-2007

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2007
    Humble Thanks,