The Cyber Space Garden
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Sightful Eyes"The garden of peaceful serenity and beauty,
6 total reviews
Comment from PUPA
Hi Lynar,
What a fascinating realisation. I loved what you did with this flower! You showed it to me in a way my own eyes wouldn't have seen, then put your words in poetic and well chosen words. Lovely work. Most enjoyable.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Hi Lynar,
What a fascinating realisation. I loved what you did with this flower! You showed it to me in a way my own eyes wouldn't have seen, then put your words in poetic and well chosen words. Lovely work. Most enjoyable.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 13-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2008
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Humble thanks, Pupa
Comment from 1Diamondeyes1
Excellent!! I like your poem. Your words are very true, images of flowers and other things are seen so differently by others. I really enjoy hearing what others see in my work. Thank you so much for choosing my work for your poem. Great job. Thank you so much for sharing this.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2007
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Excellent!! I like your poem. Your words are very true, images of flowers and other things are seen so differently by others. I really enjoy hearing what others see in my work. Thank you so much for choosing my work for your poem. Great job. Thank you so much for sharing this.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2007
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Your Very Welcome. 1Diamonfryes
Comment from manders
Great vivid imagery used here.
The artwork and color scheme greatly complimenting your words.
"Primary sad face clown
See the red bulbous nose,
A female pistil"
Excellent, short and sweet - thanks for sharing:)
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2007
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Great vivid imagery used here.
The artwork and color scheme greatly complimenting your words.
"Primary sad face clown
See the red bulbous nose,
A female pistil"
Excellent, short and sweet - thanks for sharing:)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2007
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Humble Thanks, manderd
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Humble Thanks, manderd
Comment from Teri7
I looked at the art work first and then read your words. It truly can resemble a clown in a way. This is a great write as always my friend. God bless. Love, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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I looked at the art work first and then read your words. It truly can resemble a clown in a way. This is a great write as always my friend. God bless. Love, Teri
Comment Written 19-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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Thanks Teri
Comment from Winslow
Dear Lynar,
A poetic biology lesson. Now why didn't my instructors think of that. Red, the color of love even though she has a bulbous nose.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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Dear Lynar,
A poetic biology lesson. Now why didn't my instructors think of that. Red, the color of love even though she has a bulbous nose.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 19-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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Humble Thanks
Comment from RaymondJohn
Very insightful. I had never thought of a flower as a clown's face, but it really does fit! A lovely short work that is a great pleasure to read. All best wishes. Ray.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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Very insightful. I had never thought of a flower as a clown's face, but it really does fit! A lovely short work that is a great pleasure to read. All best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2007
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Most Greatful, Ray