Comment from kintesiegel

Excellent

This is adorable and so like the communication that goes on between a writer and a "normal" person. Very comical and cute.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2007

Comment from Swtdreamz

Excellent

Do you have a pen?
ahhh, thank you, my friend. - cute like part of a disney flick

a plot emerge.
Then my thoughts converge
to...- I love it when that happens- the ink doesn't stop flowing

Ohhh, I've done it again?
Well then, goodnight, my friend.- cute- very cute and personable
good job

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2007

Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Hi Ricouard,
I enjoyed this one very much. This idea of putting a poem into conversation is very good! You go from asking a question, to answering a question, and then offering an apology, and without missing a beat! You've done very well! God bless, and best wishes!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2007

Comment from spirit_writer

Excellent

Very well done. A form of rambling that makes total sense. I was smiling as I read this, you carried off a two way conversation very well. This flowed well - held my interest, made me smile and generally was a pleasure to read!

Thank you...

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2007