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Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "House of Glass"
A collection of poetry.

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Comment from AuroraBorealis
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Just fantastic!

The imagery was beautiful...the imploration was strongly felt...the person's fear was brought out ingeniously...

The first four lines, the rhyming felt a little off, but other than that, just fantastic.

I have done a couple of reviews for you now and I have to admit, I have become a fan of your writing!!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2007
    Thank you Aurora! I am so glad to have you as a fan :-)

    I'm thrilled that you have enjoyed my work and I hope that, in the future, you will find as much joy in it as I do in sharing it.

    Thank you for this lovely review and your wonderful comments :-D
Comment from becky7777
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Excellent. I love you inspiration in this. How we can sit back and pitty ourselfs when it would be easier to let go and live again.
I think your words are an inspiration to anyone that reads this.

Becky

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2007
    Too true... I hope that it can be an inspiration. Lord knows we need it.

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem :-)
Comment from damevictoria
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Okay, I like this poem; the repeating stanzas worked to help make the rhythm and flow just right! Thank you for sharing this with me...

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2007
    You are so welcome! I am glad that you enjoyed it :-)

    Thank YOU for the great review!
Comment from RowanHowler
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Hello again,

I do think this sounds better, though now you do have four in a row which is a little much. You might also change 'cause or delete it entirely. It's your poem so it's up to you. It's lovely no matter how you have it.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2007
    Obie kabie kemosobie. I have gone in and ghanged gotta to got to which, of course, meant also changing you to you've :-/ Anywho... I thought perhaps you could give it another read and see if it sounds better.

    I appreciate your time and your review!