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Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Circle of Seasons"
A collection of poetry.

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Comment from kintesiegel
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This is simply exquisite. I don't know if i love or hate you LOL just joking. What a terrific piece this is. Congratulations you broke through your writer's block and how!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    Hey Kintesiegel! Always nice to have a review from you :-) Yup, I finally blasted away the writers block... now I can't seem to dam it back up LOL

    Thanks for the review, my friend!
Comment from mmichelle97219
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I think the blending of these haikus to be such a brilliant construction and produced and extreamly colorful and touching poem.
MIchelle

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    Thanks, mmichelle... I am glad that you enjoyed my poem :-)
Comment from Broken Fingers
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This is a beautiful attempt at capturing the seasons. Colourful and textured descriptions. A couple of minor points 1. is it Grassy Knowles or Grassy Knolls that is correct? Also the linkage between haikus I found un-necessary as they flow together well enough without.
Gavin

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    You know, I think it is knolls... thanks for bringing that to my attention. I'll have to go in and fix it asap!

    Yeah, I wasn't sure about the linking words either... but then... this is the first time I have ever tried to blend multiple haiku together :-/

    Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Comment from thenext-poe-t
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crystallized wonders
to beautifully frost the world
and breathe in new life
then comes

I adore that whole piece and love the color choice!

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    Why thank you! I am so glad that you enjoyed it :-D
Comment from AK
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Dear Rucouard,
A very lovely presentation of four different Haiku, delineating the four seasons with clarity and a delicate touch. I like the connection between them to make a cohesive whole.

My favorite and the most original image:

leaves of red and gold
softly flutter on the wind
feathers of winter

Well done. Warmest wishes,
Ami

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    Thank you, Ami... I am so glad that you enjoyed this. I wanted to use the haiku format but do something I hadn't seen done with it before. From the reactions I have recieved, I must not have done to badly :-P Thank you so much for the review and your lovely comments!