Comment from PUPA

Excellent

Hi Ricouard,
You are expressing what we go through so well.
The picture breathes in life,
when inspiration comes-
I find this part very poetic. I like your poem very much.
Pupa

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2007

This is what it does, my friend. We can see the picture as we write, but it is the words that can bring it to life. Thank you for thie wonderful review :-)

Comment from mtngalofnc

Excellent

Your poem is very good. I think that all writers can certainly relate to this one. Frustration rears it's ugly head when those thoughts are there but can't be relayed to paper. I tired to decide which stanza I liked best, but on this one I can' find a favorite for as writer they all apply. God bless, and best wishes with your writing!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2007

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It IS frustrating sometimes... you may start with one thought and emerge with something completely different. I have often thrown my pen or pencil across the room for lack of a better outlet LOL

Comment from cindydijk

Excellent

O yes, the struggle to put your ideas into words.
When done, it seems so easy, but to do it..
Good imaginary poem.
Cindy

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2007

LOL... I know! struggle, struggle, struggle. What's funny is that, even though others may think it flows like water, it is REALLY hard work sometimes :-)

Thank you for reading and reviewing.