Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "I Give To You..."A collection of poetry.
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Comment from kintesiegel
This is reallyt a beautiful viivid poem about love longed for and lost. Beautifully written. I am a fan. How do you find time to write all that you do?
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2007
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This is reallyt a beautiful viivid poem about love longed for and lost. Beautifully written. I am a fan. How do you find time to write all that you do?
Comment Written 21-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2007
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LOL... I write a poem in about an hour and a story in a day. Writing is my life... the air I breath... the sustanence that keeps me strong. :-) Sometimes, I will fall asleep and a line or a phrase will pop into my dreams. In the morning I take this word or phrase and see where it can go. The story "Breathe Again" was one of those. I was peacefully sleeping when "I died" rang through my head.
I am glad to see that I have won another fan :-) It is nice to meet those who appreciate your hard work and determination. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and leave such wonderful comments!
Comment from VICTIMEYES
this is almost like a great tune, a nice melody, it has song qualities, good theme reiterrated with the, I Give To You... really spices up the piece.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2007
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this is almost like a great tune, a nice melody, it has song qualities, good theme reiterrated with the, I Give To You... really spices up the piece.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2007
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These comments coming from you are an honor to recieve! The original thought did come as a tune in my head yet the more I pondered it, the more it seemed to speak as a story of loss. Thank you so very much for taking the time to review my humble words :-)
Comment from AuroraBorealis
Very romantic.
You conveyed the essence of great feeling. You encouraged your reader to actually 'feel' the moment, the kiss, the breath...I closed my eyes after each line. Very nicely done.
A moment missed! How many of us have had memories that we can 'feel'...very nice.
Your punctuation gave it the exact 'speed'. Dreamy.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2007
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Very romantic.
You conveyed the essence of great feeling. You encouraged your reader to actually 'feel' the moment, the kiss, the breath...I closed my eyes after each line. Very nicely done.
A moment missed! How many of us have had memories that we can 'feel'...very nice.
Your punctuation gave it the exact 'speed'. Dreamy.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2007
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments!