Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem my friend. I love the art work you chose. The colors were great. It was all done very well. I have twin sons that are doing their second year of college. Great job my friend. God bless. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2007

Thank you... I appreciate your stopping by to review my poem :-D

reply by Teri7 on 23-Jul-2007

Hugs

Comment from kintesiegel

Excellent

This is a lovely poem with a terrific choice of soothing words. Very nicely done indeed. It is a pleasure to read you. bev

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

Thank you! I am glad that my words were able to sooth you and instill a sense of peice.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is a beautiful definition of this picture you have painted very good image in so few words as it should be in these short restricted form because that is there strength I enjoyed regards Fuller

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

Thank you... I am glad you were able to bask in the warmth and beauty of my sunset :-)

Comment from cheshire blue

Excellent

I liked this poem from the instant I saw it.
Great artwork so fitting the piece.
I adored the second line as gold and crimson entwine
The whole thing was a delight.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

LOL... you know, it took me almost an hour to find the right words to express the gold and crimson together. It is a joy to know I finally found the right ones :-)

Comment from GerryMacNeil

Excellent

This is simply superb! I am speechless. This is easily the best haiku I have seen on this site. The rhythm of it is lovely and true. The photo isn't credited. Is it yours? If it isn't it is now, and mine! I also love the line in your profile about wanting to contribute as much as your receive---I practice "mindfulness meditation" and I frequently repeat "receiving" on the in-breath, and "giving" on the outbreath. It touches me in a deep place that one needs both.
Gerry

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

Your comments flatter me! The picture is not credited to me though my fiance' took it... gee... I guess it DOES belong to me :-)

That is the whole purpose of sharing, I believe. One must be willing to help others if they wish to better themselves.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Your words were touching and have brightened my day.

reply by GerryMacNeil on 20-Jul-2007

Back at ya, friend!
Gerry

Comment from Penpal

Excellent

This is a very beautiful haiku which combined with your picture choice expresses the setting sun exquistitely. Well done.

Sallysaucer

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

Why thank you very much :-) I am so glad that you stopped in to review my work

Comment from VICTIMEYES

Excellent

you definately completed the scence of the sky in this poem rather nicely with the bathing idea, very solid ending.nicely done.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2007

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007

:-) Thank you very much