Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Bitter Yesterday's"A collection of poetry.
3 total reviews
Comment from TwoJs
Challenging.
But you did it fine. Very expressive and I even understood what you were saying Good for how you have to write it. Very nice indeed
My favorite:
A rhythm of passion and cruel loss
That slowly bleeds my soul,
Spicy visual
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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Challenging.
But you did it fine. Very expressive and I even understood what you were saying Good for how you have to write it. Very nice indeed
My favorite:
A rhythm of passion and cruel loss
That slowly bleeds my soul,
Spicy visual
Comment Written 06-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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I love that line as well... and to be honest.... I struggled to get rhythm of passion to conform to what I was trying to express!
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Your comments are greatly appreciated :-)
Comment from OneGirl
This is excellent. You are very good at this. You did awesome considering the rules you had to folllow to write it. What is most amazing to me is that the poem makes perfect sense. This is a very admirable poem. Very good job. Keep up the hard work. You should go far...
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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This is excellent. You are very good at this. You did awesome considering the rules you had to folllow to write it. What is most amazing to me is that the poem makes perfect sense. This is a very admirable poem. Very good job. Keep up the hard work. You should go far...
Comment Written 06-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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Thank you for this wonderful review and taking the time to read my work! I wanted to do something different... a backwards poem if you will... where I chose the words before I even thought to write the poem. It was extremely difficult to string the words into a cohesive whole but that was the point of the challenge. I'm glad that it DID make sense... cause there was a HUGE chance that it might not have...lol
Comment from dragonqueen1983
i really like this poem. tis well written and i think you've given yourself a worthy challenge. well done keep on writing and improving
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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i really like this poem. tis well written and i think you've given yourself a worthy challenge. well done keep on writing and improving
Comment Written 06-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2007
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work! In all honesty... this was extremely hard to accomplish. There were so many different possibilities that my mind kept wandering off in a hundred different directions!