Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "Winds Of Change"15 total reviews
Comment from Margokatt
Hey woman, I really like the soft flow and tone of this. You don't usually take the rhyming route, but you did a fab job here!
Sorry I've been away.
Anyway, this was my favorite stanza!
Debris of disappointment
Are carried out in time
A welcome fresh anointing
Wafts peacefulness sublime
well done
MK
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2007
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Hey woman, I really like the soft flow and tone of this. You don't usually take the rhyming route, but you did a fab job here!
Sorry I've been away.
Anyway, this was my favorite stanza!
Debris of disappointment
Are carried out in time
A welcome fresh anointing
Wafts peacefulness sublime
well done
MK
Comment Written 09-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2007
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Thanks Rhyming seems to be flowing lately...
Great hearing from you
Comment from Walter L. Jones
A gift in words and warmth, change and growth, being able to feel as well as see, a true trust emotion overcoming, like a warm summer breeze, new life.. Walt
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A gift in words and warmth, change and growth, being able to feel as well as see, a true trust emotion overcoming, like a warm summer breeze, new life.. Walt
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
Comment from healfromwithin
This was lovely, well done and full of serenity. I enjoyed the meter and pace of your piece. The rhyme was very good throughout, with the exception of the "near rhyme" in the first stanza (which I still liked.) Good job. ~healfromwithin
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This was lovely, well done and full of serenity. I enjoyed the meter and pace of your piece. The rhyme was very good throughout, with the exception of the "near rhyme" in the first stanza (which I still liked.) Good job. ~healfromwithin
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
Comment from cheshire blue
This is a really nice poem. It is nicely presented.
You have used excellent rhyme, and a wonderful choice of words.
I liked the thinking of a message on the wind, and regeneration of love.
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This is a really nice poem. It is nicely presented.
You have used excellent rhyme, and a wonderful choice of words.
I liked the thinking of a message on the wind, and regeneration of love.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
Comment from Martie
Dear Jewell
I have not known another who is as familiar with this feeling as I have been, until now. Your photography is as beautiful and spirit centered as your poetry. Very lovely!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2007
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Dear Jewell
I have not known another who is as familiar with this feeling as I have been, until now. Your photography is as beautiful and spirit centered as your poetry. Very lovely!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2007
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Hi Martie...thank you. I always like hearing from a kindred soul.
Comment from Oatmeal
Inner Sanctum,
This was a wonderful piece of poetry! I truly enjoyed the read. The flow was smooth.
Your arrangement was done quite well. The rhyming was successful.
Telling things very plainly and comprehensibly. This is very detailed written poem.
Very descriptive and created impressions are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG to be found.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Inner Sanctum,
This was a wonderful piece of poetry! I truly enjoyed the read. The flow was smooth.
Your arrangement was done quite well. The rhyming was successful.
Telling things very plainly and comprehensibly. This is very detailed written poem.
Very descriptive and created impressions are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG to be found.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
Comment from Kingsland
this poem has a very good message within its lines
I like when you write philosophically
for you really do it quite well
this was my pleasure to read and review this well written verse... John
Artistic Prism
This is the first of many to come
It's an artistic prism on the run
Silent symbols, glaring suns
Displaying philosophical words on the run
The Missouri breaks, creates a flow
Wondrous thinking, all to be known
Casading rhythms beating slow
Starship gleaming, asteroids in tow
Planet Mercury message's, in the glow
Time keeps ticking away with our souls
A molten mind meld, of sonnets to unfold
Several sentences turning into gold
As poets, we search for words of worth
As we write our lyrics for better or worse
So go have a breakfast of words
As they are lined up to be observed
This is the first of many to come
It's an artistic prism on the run... John Allen Kingsland
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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this poem has a very good message within its lines
I like when you write philosophically
for you really do it quite well
this was my pleasure to read and review this well written verse... John
Artistic Prism
This is the first of many to come
It's an artistic prism on the run
Silent symbols, glaring suns
Displaying philosophical words on the run
The Missouri breaks, creates a flow
Wondrous thinking, all to be known
Casading rhythms beating slow
Starship gleaming, asteroids in tow
Planet Mercury message's, in the glow
Time keeps ticking away with our souls
A molten mind meld, of sonnets to unfold
Several sentences turning into gold
As poets, we search for words of worth
As we write our lyrics for better or worse
So go have a breakfast of words
As they are lined up to be observed
This is the first of many to come
It's an artistic prism on the run... John Allen Kingsland
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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NOW THAT IS AWESOME... Thanks so much John!
Comment from Red Heart
Replenish my soul in gentle breezes blow
Favor me with blessings I wish to know
Bring forth your treasure behind the mask
to free me allowing my spirit to bask
In loves lyrics and with lofty songs
for it's in this peaceful waft I belong
dwelling in passions flame once more
dispelling disappointment with sweet ardor.
Red Heart
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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Replenish my soul in gentle breezes blow
Favor me with blessings I wish to know
Bring forth your treasure behind the mask
to free me allowing my spirit to bask
In loves lyrics and with lofty songs
for it's in this peaceful waft I belong
dwelling in passions flame once more
dispelling disappointment with sweet ardor.
Red Heart
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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Wow Red, I am awed at your words which I know are a result of my poetry inspiring you. Now this is what I'M TALKIN' ABOUT! Poets inspirint poets!
Comment from Chgraphicurt
Very nice poem...the only thing that I would change about it if it were mine is the font. Maybe make it bolder or a different color because it's a little hard to read.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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Very nice poem...the only thing that I would change about it if it were mine is the font. Maybe make it bolder or a different color because it's a little hard to read.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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Maybe you need bifocals? ;-) I'm glad you enjoyed it
If I can figure out the new editor, I'll do that.I don't like what it does when I switch over though and always fight the thing...
I appreciate your review, nevertheless
Comment from cmay44
HI JEWELL
WOW, THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY, I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL, WELL-WRITTEN POEM AND IT IS WONDERFUL IN RHYME AND RHYTHM AND THE THEME IS SO GREAT. I SAY BRAVO ON THIS ONE, AND I TRULY ENJOYED THIS VERY PLEASANT READ.
GOD BLESS
LOVE YOU
CAROLYN
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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HI JEWELL
WOW, THAT'S ALL I CAN SAY, I LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL, WELL-WRITTEN POEM AND IT IS WONDERFUL IN RHYME AND RHYTHM AND THE THEME IS SO GREAT. I SAY BRAVO ON THIS ONE, AND I TRULY ENJOYED THIS VERY PLEASANT READ.
GOD BLESS
LOVE YOU
CAROLYN
Comment Written 07-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2007
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WHY THANK YOU MY FRIEND! Luv ya, Jewell