Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from GrandmaSharon
Just my opinion that the poem would look nice centered under the picture. Have I died to self? I think so but then I find myself doing something selfish and have to repent and try again. Thankful for a Savior who always picks me up again.
God bless you,
Sharon
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Just my opinion that the poem would look nice centered under the picture. Have I died to self? I think so but then I find myself doing something selfish and have to repent and try again. Thankful for a Savior who always picks me up again.
God bless you,
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Jan-2007
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hi Miss J,
For me the death of self came when the life of others was taken by my hand. The self was replaced by a hardened shell of an empty man who lost all emotional response to life. One foot in front of the other until that man can discover "
Why" Thanks for sharing... Buddy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2007
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Hi Miss J,
For me the death of self came when the life of others was taken by my hand. The self was replaced by a hardened shell of an empty man who lost all emotional response to life. One foot in front of the other until that man can discover "
Why" Thanks for sharing... Buddy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2007
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Thank you for your thoughts. I've missed U Buddy.
Comment from 24chas
Wow, this was really awesome, Jewell. I understand exactly what you're saying and that's a great way to look at it. Sometimes I wonder if life is only a dream and when we awaken we're in our eternal place.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2007
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Wow, this was really awesome, Jewell. I understand exactly what you're saying and that's a great way to look at it. Sometimes I wonder if life is only a dream and when we awaken we're in our eternal place.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2007
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Well, life can be a dream...It is when we are aware of our spirit-man as well as our natural man that life comes into balance and deeper understanding.
Glad you liked it.
Comment from Shimmerbliss
Wow! This entire entry is lovely. The image and colors are beautiful with your words. This is just one of those "ker-plunk" poems that is so awesome!
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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Wow! This entire entry is lovely. The image and colors are beautiful with your words. This is just one of those "ker-plunk" poems that is so awesome!
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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kerplunk...lol love that. Thanks for the whammy review! You rock. Please take a look at today's post? Thanks hun.
Comment from Thomas Raine
Huh? I never really looked at this kind of thought process this way...
Living without dying, and dying without living...
I think you may have just inspired my next write. Really.
"That the death
You were to
Experience
Could bring you
Life" - Made me think of my death as a sinner, and my birth as a Christian.
Thanks for sharing!
- TR
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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Huh? I never really looked at this kind of thought process this way...
Living without dying, and dying without living...
I think you may have just inspired my next write. Really.
"That the death
You were to
Experience
Could bring you
Life" - Made me think of my death as a sinner, and my birth as a Christian.
Thanks for sharing!
- TR
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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Wow--- THANK U!
Comment from Kingsland
now this piece of poetry I understand one hundred percent
this was a very well written piece of poetry
that was my pleasure to read and review... John
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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now this piece of poetry I understand one hundred percent
this was a very well written piece of poetry
that was my pleasure to read and review... John
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
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Thank you...I hadn't seen this before our pm exchange and I appreciate it.
Comment from rl dubour
Life Line-- this is an excellent thought provoking piece, death is not the end but a new beginning, to be with our loved ones who have gone ahead and waiting for each of us to join them. great job, ron
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Life Line-- this is an excellent thought provoking piece, death is not the end but a new beginning, to be with our loved ones who have gone ahead and waiting for each of us to join them. great job, ron
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
Comment from random musings
Such a challenge you present. Nice presentation as always. You seem to have a knack for this. LOL Well done. I liked the simple straight forward wording. Nothing work though to find meaning.
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Such a challenge you present. Nice presentation as always. You seem to have a knack for this. LOL Well done. I liked the simple straight forward wording. Nothing work though to find meaning.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
Comment from volunteer angel
I don't believe in gypsies fortune telling or how a life line predicts age. That one thing only God knows. A prophet might be able to foretell things that happen, if he's truly a man of God. Your poem poses some interesting questions. Great job! V.A.
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I don't believe in gypsies fortune telling or how a life line predicts age. That one thing only God knows. A prophet might be able to foretell things that happen, if he's truly a man of God. Your poem poses some interesting questions. Great job! V.A.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
Comment from sengwriter
Hi Jewell,
Just you had a look at the back cover of a book before reading.
Realization shown here is pretty good. I liked it you know it's
highly philosophical - and any philosophy about life is my always favorite.
The theme you've chosen is really appreciable.
Thank you so much.
Gautam :)
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Hi Jewell,
Just you had a look at the back cover of a book before reading.
Realization shown here is pretty good. I liked it you know it's
highly philosophical - and any philosophy about life is my always favorite.
The theme you've chosen is really appreciable.
Thank you so much.
Gautam :)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007