Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from hager
The Picture you paint.... is Real. The feet... I see and hear the patter of pads on tile, cooled from the night.. Rain.... I heard it and tasted it
How do I write this Review... Let me say "I looked in on your morning, it being Monday I had the day off too.
No thats not the way to Review...The tossing of hair....no no ....
Clay! Thats It.
It is late and I'm pushing ... forgive.... I'm out of 6's
Here it is the Review...
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I Really connected with this poem, looking and seeing All views, smells, feeling, the air.. You name it and I just Read about it.... Nice, Very Nice Beauty .... Take care .... bill
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2006
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The Picture you paint.... is Real. The feet... I see and hear the patter of pads on tile, cooled from the night.. Rain.... I heard it and tasted it
How do I write this Review... Let me say "I looked in on your morning, it being Monday I had the day off too.
No thats not the way to Review...The tossing of hair....no no ....
Clay! Thats It.
It is late and I'm pushing ... forgive.... I'm out of 6's
Here it is the Review...
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I Really connected with this poem, looking and seeing All views, smells, feeling, the air.. You name it and I just Read about it.... Nice, Very Nice Beauty .... Take care .... bill
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2006
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SOoooo, FINALLY I hear from you Bill. lol!
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Like I said "Please Forgive .... whc
Comment from rl dubour
Monday Morning--- monday morning sounds pretty good especially on a day off at that, very good write and very good imagery, very good job, ron
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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Monday Morning--- monday morning sounds pretty good especially on a day off at that, very good write and very good imagery, very good job, ron
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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thank you Ron.
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always, ron
Comment from suresh kumar
Hi Jewell,
Yes, one has to thank God for every new day He gives us. And make the best of it. This free flowing poem was full of imagery, very vivid and creative, and the occasional alliteration added to its beauty. Such poems had the power of refreshing us.
.suresh kumar.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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Hi Jewell,
Yes, one has to thank God for every new day He gives us. And make the best of it. This free flowing poem was full of imagery, very vivid and creative, and the occasional alliteration added to its beauty. Such poems had the power of refreshing us.
.suresh kumar.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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..."the power of refreshing .." Oh to carry that power is a gift. whew! I Like that! thanks!
Comment from G.B. Smith
Embracing every new day
is a gift to yourself
Welcome the morning
It could be your last...
Jewell I love this. It really brought to mind how my nearly dying in June has given me new resolve to live each day to its fullest. Nicely done my friend
Bear
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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Embracing every new day
is a gift to yourself
Welcome the morning
It could be your last...
Jewell I love this. It really brought to mind how my nearly dying in June has given me new resolve to live each day to its fullest. Nicely done my friend
Bear
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2006
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Thank you Bear, I recently lost a good friend. She was only 21 and DID live life to the fullest! Every day since her death, a week ago, I keep thinking of how much more she lived in 21 yrs. than I have in 48!
Comment from Words_Thru_Blue_Eyes
Your auother's note is really cute! I really like this poem a lot, it is a sense of relaxation and it got me relaxed for a couple minutes there thinking of looking outside and the birds, the sky, the trees and ECT.. I really like this a lot. So simple, but so unique and creative! =)
Alecia
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Your auother's note is really cute! I really like this poem a lot, it is a sense of relaxation and it got me relaxed for a couple minutes there thinking of looking outside and the birds, the sky, the trees and ECT.. I really like this a lot. So simple, but so unique and creative! =)
Alecia
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Thanks kiddo. I love hearing from you.
Comment from Homespring
Inner Sanctum---another beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery and excellent use of personification and repetition. The form is perfect and the meter as well. I like the simile in the second stanza. Great job and so enjoyable to read. Homespring
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Inner Sanctum---another beautiful poem full of wonderful imagery and excellent use of personification and repetition. The form is perfect and the meter as well. I like the simile in the second stanza. Great job and so enjoyable to read. Homespring
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Thanks again!
Comment from drivenbackward
Hmmm... Your notes don't really match the content for me. I guess I missed on this one. I thought it really was as simple as it was written. Still, nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Hmmm... Your notes don't really match the content for me. I guess I missed on this one. I thought it really was as simple as it was written. Still, nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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You don't get me, yet, do you?
thanks.
Hidden behind any verse, whether light or deep lies a message that matters to awaken thoughts and enlighten souls.
Comment from RaymondJohn
Cute poem. You have all the good images. Most of the time they are the ones I enjoy in the morning, myself. Thanks for a fine read. Ray
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Cute poem. You have all the good images. Most of the time they are the ones I enjoy in the morning, myself. Thanks for a fine read. Ray
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Thank you Ray, as always...
Comment from EmileJP
Wow...you embrace each day with fresh love and lively spirit. Your work confronts life in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying a subtle beauty that is gently distributed throughout your poem. We are all slaves to our environments and when we allow our feelings free reign we open ourselves to a world of wonder.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Wow...you embrace each day with fresh love and lively spirit. Your work confronts life in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying a subtle beauty that is gently distributed throughout your poem. We are all slaves to our environments and when we allow our feelings free reign we open ourselves to a world of wonder.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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Thank you so much Emile! Yes, to embrace life in love is the greatest gift to ourselves.
Comment from cmay44
You're too amazing! Each one is just as good or better than the one before.
You are truly blessed and gifted with a very special way of expressing yourself. Keep them coming! I look forward to each one.
Have a blessed day,
Carolyn
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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You're too amazing! Each one is just as good or better than the one before.
You are truly blessed and gifted with a very special way of expressing yourself. Keep them coming! I look forward to each one.
Have a blessed day,
Carolyn
Comment Written 28-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2006
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It is always a treat to get your possitive notes! thanks so very much!