Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Shouldn't Man Achieve Human Rank Status?"Experiences of living
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Comment from jmdg1954
Short, choppy, wrods, just thrown, together, creating something, elevated, in stature, trying to impress, the many, readers. On ths, site. with old English, yet, you never respond. to , any questions we pose. Do you think, you are so, much! better, than we?. with the commas, one words phrase...
I,Just,Don't,Get It.... please could you explain???
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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Short, choppy, wrods, just thrown, together, creating something, elevated, in stature, trying to impress, the many, readers. On ths, site. with old English, yet, you never respond. to , any questions we pose. Do you think, you are so, much! better, than we?. with the commas, one words phrase...
I,Just,Don't,Get It.... please could you explain???
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from G.B. Smith
This piece is more prose than poetry but there is nothing wrong with that. However, I found my mind wandering as I read and no matter how hard I tried I couldn't become engaged all the way through. You are intelligent and have a command of the English language but I think you should work on your skills as a poet.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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This piece is more prose than poetry but there is nothing wrong with that. However, I found my mind wandering as I read and no matter how hard I tried I couldn't become engaged all the way through. You are intelligent and have a command of the English language but I think you should work on your skills as a poet.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013
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THANKS.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is all very heavy stuff - takes some understanding
in places. I have to read it through twice to grasp it.
do you ever reply to your reviews? Seems only courteous.
Margaret
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This is all very heavy stuff - takes some understanding
in places. I have to read it through twice to grasp it.
do you ever reply to your reviews? Seems only courteous.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Your work always leaves me in wonder. Each time I read there is always a part that stays with me. In 'human status' I would have to say 'the babies in the womb have the ability to learn.. And, systems, control measures unlike Gods. Great write, thanks, Carolyn
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Your work always leaves me in wonder. Each time I read there is always a part that stays with me. In 'human status' I would have to say 'the babies in the womb have the ability to learn.. And, systems, control measures unlike Gods. Great write, thanks, Carolyn
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from nomi338
This is a poem with power! You conjure up very powerful images. I believe that man has the world that he created, either through his own devices or through his indulgence of those who are responsible for constructing the world in which we live.
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This is a poem with power! You conjure up very powerful images. I believe that man has the world that he created, either through his own devices or through his indulgence of those who are responsible for constructing the world in which we live.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from rjuselius
a brilliant social commentary! gives food for thought! i also like the satirical voice in the poem!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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a brilliant social commentary! gives food for thought! i also like the satirical voice in the poem!
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Cedar
It is obvious that you feel very passionate about the subject that you have written about. However, I don't completely follow your train of thought. As I said before, we all have different styles of writing.
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It is obvious that you feel very passionate about the subject that you have written about. However, I don't completely follow your train of thought. As I said before, we all have different styles of writing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A very creatively written poem and so full of truth. I like your use of punctuation--makes the poem much stronger~Debbie
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upto post doctorate level (up to)
A very creatively written poem and so full of truth. I like your use of punctuation--makes the poem much stronger~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think you are a very deep poet, with strong values and good arguments about the theory of life and mankind. You are not easy to understand, but then again most poets do have their own inner thoughts, that make the words work perfectly in the grand scheme of life. Whatever you do, however you write, keep writing for yourself in the way that is truly you and not as others want you to be. A very interesting read! :) Sandra
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I think you are a very deep poet, with strong values and good arguments about the theory of life and mankind. You are not easy to understand, but then again most poets do have their own inner thoughts, that make the words work perfectly in the grand scheme of life. Whatever you do, however you write, keep writing for yourself in the way that is truly you and not as others want you to be. A very interesting read! :) Sandra
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
Comment from juliedickson55
A great study in human nature...
exploring the realms of thought and action.
Knowledge, achievement are of what importance?
Can the world survive when chaos is struck by leaders, and the learned are no longer sought after?
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A great study in human nature...
exploring the realms of thought and action.
Knowledge, achievement are of what importance?
Can the world survive when chaos is struck by leaders, and the learned are no longer sought after?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
