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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Alcreator:
This is quite an interesting acrostic poem. In my honest opinion, no matter what man may invent, it will never be greater than the God I serve. What man makes will eventually break.
Rdfrdmom2
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Alcreator:
This is quite an interesting acrostic poem. In my honest opinion, no matter what man may invent, it will never be greater than the God I serve. What man makes will eventually break.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Shouldn't Man Achieve Human Rank Status?
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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Shouldn't Man Achieve Human Rank Status?
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
Man has been made a little lower than the angels, but can aspire to being God's, so He is way more potential than any human being has the right to be. Why Jesus would elevate us to be His brothers and sisters is beyond my comprehension, well done, blessings Roy
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Man has been made a little lower than the angels, but can aspire to being God's, so He is way more potential than any human being has the right to be. Why Jesus would elevate us to be His brothers and sisters is beyond my comprehension, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
I thought that the image you chose was a great representation of the piece - almost an ode to the foreboding Skynet future. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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I thought that the image you chose was a great representation of the piece - almost an ode to the foreboding Skynet future. Great work and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from lakeport
Shouldn't man achieve humen rank status, Indeed that a very heartfelt expressed story poem. Nice in form,
I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. lakeport.
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Shouldn't man achieve humen rank status, Indeed that a very heartfelt expressed story poem. Nice in form,
I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
Comment from fdgsr
This deserves six for the sheer genius of the theme. It is written in the style of a texting while driving. It has adequate punctuation, grammar, spelling and syntax while retaining the succinct style of texting. Not a poem, but texting is not prose either. I hope that writing skill does not disappear in the truncated style of the phone texting message. However, you got your message across to all who can take off the blinders and see it. I love it.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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This deserves six for the sheer genius of the theme. It is written in the style of a texting while driving. It has adequate punctuation, grammar, spelling and syntax while retaining the succinct style of texting. Not a poem, but texting is not prose either. I hope that writing skill does not disappear in the truncated style of the phone texting message. However, you got your message across to all who can take off the blinders and see it. I love it.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR EXHAUSTIVE PROFESSIONAL 6-STAR RATED REVIEW.
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See reply to your other one. I was actually commenting on it this one. My mistake.
Comment from bhogg
Pretty clever to write in acrostic format and ask some basic questions. Who is man and at the end of it all, why are we so special.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Pretty clever to write in acrostic format and ask some basic questions. Who is man and at the end of it all, why are we so special.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR INTELLIGENT PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from MelReyn
I'm not perfect when it comes to understanding poetry. So I'm going to go out on a limb and say that this has to do with things that Stephen Quayle speaks about on Coast to Coast. Transhumanism and genetic armageddon. The whole issue being that some people believe that God didn't do a good enough job and that they can improve on that design.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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I'm not perfect when it comes to understanding poetry. So I'm going to go out on a limb and say that this has to do with things that Stephen Quayle speaks about on Coast to Coast. Transhumanism and genetic armageddon. The whole issue being that some people believe that God didn't do a good enough job and that they can improve on that design.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENDABLE PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
The particular concept, theme, and the message in this piece could easily be lost among the words you've written (typed). Too many would only see the science.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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The particular concept, theme, and the message in this piece could easily be lost among the words you've written (typed). Too many would only see the science.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR FAIR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
Comment from MM lives on :)
What is man? What is really God? Shall we place ourselves on pedestals or live a life of solitude, ??? questions that produce answers my wise friend
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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What is man? What is really God? Shall we place ourselves on pedestals or live a life of solitude, ??? questions that produce answers my wise friend
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENDABLE PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.
