Oh Life!
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Comment from prayingpoet
Interesting, I am assuming that when you use the word Him...your refer to GOD? I do have to read these poems of yours 3 or 4 times before I get them...thanks.
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Interesting, I am assuming that when you use the word Him...your refer to GOD? I do have to read these poems of yours 3 or 4 times before I get them...thanks.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Jerry Rauhuff
When bloomed, graced hearts take essence, o fate! I like how this line flows. I like this poem and it has great message. I say well done and thanks for caring.
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When bloomed, graced hearts take essence, o fate! I like how this line flows. I like this poem and it has great message. I say well done and thanks for caring.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Yes, this is a well thoughtout work with deep muse and steams from the human perspectives and the run of the life of a man. Good use of imageries and metaphors in particular.
ola thomas
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Yes, this is a well thoughtout work with deep muse and steams from the human perspectives and the run of the life of a man. Good use of imageries and metaphors in particular.
ola thomas
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Tina McKala
Interesting write, you express your opinion and ideas about life and mankind and incorporate them into the poem well. A solid philosophical poem.
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Interesting write, you express your opinion and ideas about life and mankind and incorporate them into the poem well. A solid philosophical poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice work on this free verse poem about finding the beauty and goodness in life in the simple things before the blackness of bad habit and sin take it away, like greed. It seems a notice to be wise writer that helps spread the good.
I like the alliteration in Gifted Grace
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Nice work on this free verse poem about finding the beauty and goodness in life in the simple things before the blackness of bad habit and sin take it away, like greed. It seems a notice to be wise writer that helps spread the good.
I like the alliteration in Gifted Grace
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Norbanus
Reflections from the world where giants grow
casting shadows into places cheery
then vanish past those things we think we know
to lease a falling word and produce dreary
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Reflections from the world where giants grow
casting shadows into places cheery
then vanish past those things we think we know
to lease a falling word and produce dreary
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Galactia
This is a beautiful written poem reflecting your appreciation and gratatude to your God.
Love the 1srt stanza...
Fragrance, His Gifted Grace, color and beauty
Infinite mortal lessons poured in tiny white petals
O tulip! You carry His White Message, so mute!
You live and offer His Gift for awhile, what a Rule!
Good Heavens! Wise bards drink white to the lee
reflecting his love and purity.
Great job
regards
tia
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This is a beautiful written poem reflecting your appreciation and gratatude to your God.
Love the 1srt stanza...
Fragrance, His Gifted Grace, color and beauty
Infinite mortal lessons poured in tiny white petals
O tulip! You carry His White Message, so mute!
You live and offer His Gift for awhile, what a Rule!
Good Heavens! Wise bards drink white to the lee
reflecting his love and purity.
Great job
regards
tia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
And the poets will sing of His messages all around, if only mankind would stop long enough from their daily routines to see the wonder of His universe all around them. And the Bards will desperately sing on and on....
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And the poets will sing of His messages all around, if only mankind would stop long enough from their daily routines to see the wonder of His universe all around them. And the Bards will desperately sing on and on....
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, alcreator, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the bards' ability to give color to those without it. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, alcreator, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the bards' ability to give color to those without it. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from jaeladarling
I like the vintage feel in this piece. Or maybe "antique" is a better word. LOL It works, whatever you want to call it. Adds to the ambiance, if poetry can contain such a thing. :) Nice work.
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I like the vintage feel in this piece. Or maybe "antique" is a better word. LOL It works, whatever you want to call it. Adds to the ambiance, if poetry can contain such a thing. :) Nice work.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
