Oh Life!
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Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
My favourite stanza.
Fragrance, His Gifted Grace, color and beauty
Infinite mortal lessons poured in tiny white petals
O tulip! You carry His White Message, so mute!
You live and offer His Gift for awhile, what a Rule!
Good Heavens! Wise bards drink white to the lee
Take care and keep writing, Pete
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Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
My favourite stanza.
Fragrance, His Gifted Grace, color and beauty
Infinite mortal lessons poured in tiny white petals
O tulip! You carry His White Message, so mute!
You live and offer His Gift for awhile, what a Rule!
Good Heavens! Wise bards drink white to the lee
Take care and keep writing, Pete
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
It's so true, the thing that marks the writer, or rather the poet, is that there is a connection between between the physical realm, and the ethereal. Beautifully written, the language is great, I love this, an excellent post. Well done, blessings Roy
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It's so true, the thing that marks the writer, or rather the poet, is that there is a connection between between the physical realm, and the ethereal. Beautifully written, the language is great, I love this, an excellent post. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from candi lester
Here, here.....................
I love to read poetry like this..........
it truly has meaning...........
with a desire to have people change............
thanks for sharing with us.........
SWEETNESS FOREVER
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Here, here.....................
I love to read poetry like this..........
it truly has meaning...........
with a desire to have people change............
thanks for sharing with us.........
SWEETNESS FOREVER
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
An interesting write. I especially enjoyed the middle stanza. How many of us are dead before the day begins because of our negativity. Great write~Debbie
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An interesting write. I especially enjoyed the middle stanza. How many of us are dead before the day begins because of our negativity. Great write~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Chaise Norfleet
Your pieces have really good philosophical aspects to them that I have had to read two or three times to understand. Great way to keep the reader active within the poetry. Once again, mankind has a lot to continue to learn, and messages such as these will certainly awaken out thinking.
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Your pieces have really good philosophical aspects to them that I have had to read two or three times to understand. Great way to keep the reader active within the poetry. Once again, mankind has a lot to continue to learn, and messages such as these will certainly awaken out thinking.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from amada
This is another poem of yours that I like very much because of the phrase His Gifted Grace. Of course, everything in the senses is a grace. You say it all so great!
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This is another poem of yours that I like very much because of the phrase His Gifted Grace. Of course, everything in the senses is a grace. You say it all so great!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from jmdg1954
I'm sure this is a well thought out poem. If I take it line for line individually I can make something of it. But as a whole... Forget it, a bunch of words strung together, no unity.
Sorry.., john
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I'm sure this is a well thought out poem. If I take it line for line individually I can make something of it. But as a whole... Forget it, a bunch of words strung together, no unity.
Sorry.., john
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from rjuselius
an interesting poem with an interesting point of view!
thank you for sharing such an intriguing piece of poetry, which i cannot claim i wholly understand..
rebekka x
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an interesting poem with an interesting point of view!
thank you for sharing such an intriguing piece of poetry, which i cannot claim i wholly understand..
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
you have some well chosen lines here, ALD, but again
they don't speak to me. there seems to be no cohesion
from one line to the next, it's much a nothing of
nice words.
regards, eph.
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you have some well chosen lines here, ALD, but again
they don't speak to me. there seems to be no cohesion
from one line to the next, it's much a nothing of
nice words.
regards, eph.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
Comment from Bobbi22
Writing is like a flower blossoming bringing forth color to the otherwise blank canvas. Interesting message here - a few obscure lines, especially the middle stanza. Some good word choices.
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Writing is like a flower blossoming bringing forth color to the otherwise blank canvas. Interesting message here - a few obscure lines, especially the middle stanza. Some good word choices.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2013
