To the Moon and Back
A free verse love poem21 total reviews
Comment from Nicki.B
I really love what you have done hear a reverse poem, I couldn't even begin to try its seems som complicated but you've done a fine job at it here, well done.
A beautiful poem of love so true and it's uplifting and special.
Well done and good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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I really love what you have done hear a reverse poem, I couldn't even begin to try its seems som complicated but you've done a fine job at it here, well done.
A beautiful poem of love so true and it's uplifting and special.
Well done and good luck with the contest!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind review! Glad you like it.
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You're very welcome Anna, have a great day :) x
Comment from Ulla
Aw, that is a lovely lovely poem written in free verse. I so hope this is biographical. It gives me hope.
I really liked that it can be read both ways. Good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Aw, that is a lovely lovely poem written in free verse. I so hope this is biographical. It gives me hope.
I really liked that it can be read both ways. Good luck in the contest. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind review. Yes, it is based on my marriage although I would say it’s not always rosy. Good more than 80% of the time so good enough in my book lol.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Free Verse Love poem contest. It is lovely as a free verse poem and then you discover it is also a mirror poem. I have been trying to do a decent mirror poems for a long time and can't get it to work. Good job on yours! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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An excellent entry for the Free Verse Love poem contest. It is lovely as a free verse poem and then you discover it is also a mirror poem. I have been trying to do a decent mirror poems for a long time and can't get it to work. Good job on yours! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind review! Glad you like it.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely rhyming couplet love poem.
My grandson's have been saying, "I love you to the moon and back" to the family and I love it. Sweet sentiment in a cleverly written poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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A lovely rhyming couplet love poem.
My grandson's have been saying, "I love you to the moon and back" to the family and I love it. Sweet sentiment in a cleverly written poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Aww! He sounds so adorable. This makes me smile. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
How sweet and neat this poem reads and means
whether it is read from top to bottom or...
from bottom to top...
or East to West or West to East
and if given the chance from North to South
and well, you know. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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How sweet and neat this poem reads and means
whether it is read from top to bottom or...
from bottom to top...
or East to West or West to East
and if given the chance from North to South
and well, you know. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Lol. Thanks for reading and this hilarious review!
Comment from teafor2
Mrs Anna Howard, Here I was all prepared to read a flowing free verse poem, and was pleasantly surprised by an excellent write of rhyming couplets which are just as effectively and poignantly read in reverse direction...I liked that you only used two feminine rhymes (spoken/token)
to express these amorous affections/attractions for your significant other.
Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Mrs Anna Howard, Here I was all prepared to read a flowing free verse poem, and was pleasantly surprised by an excellent write of rhyming couplets which are just as effectively and poignantly read in reverse direction...I liked that you only used two feminine rhymes (spoken/token)
to express these amorous affections/attractions for your significant other.
Good luck with this in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on the poem.
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from royowen
I don't think it's really a free verse poem, but it's a darn good one, the closest thing I can get is an aabb rhymed with a kyrielle flavour of a repeating line, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I don't think it's really a free verse poem, but it's a darn good one, the closest thing I can get is an aabb rhymed with a kyrielle flavour of a repeating line, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for reviewing and sharing your thoughts! I wondered too if a free verse can rhyme. Oh well lol.
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Not really, it can, but sporadically only, I've written a few. But that's OK Ann, it was still good.
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I see. Thanks so much!
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That's ok Ann,
Comment from Begin Again
Wow! I have too difficult of a time to even write a poem and you wrote one...a very beautiful one with lots of meaning - that can be read in either direction. How awesome is that!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Wow! I have too difficult of a time to even write a poem and you wrote one...a very beautiful one with lots of meaning - that can be read in either direction. How awesome is that!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem!
Comment from Karen Cherry
Well that is clever. I did one of those a while back. They are hard work. This is a lovely example. For more free pictures you can go to Google, Bing, Stock, and Pinterest among others. Just write in your author's notes where they come from. keep writing. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Well that is clever. I did one of those a while back. They are hard work. This is a lovely example. For more free pictures you can go to Google, Bing, Stock, and Pinterest among others. Just write in your author's notes where they come from. keep writing. Karen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem!
Also thanks for the tips on the pics. I really appreciate it.
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U R Welcome. Karen
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi I can see you are full of love and you are happy. Nothing should disturb this . There is love here and there is trust and I am sure there is always happiness. Still be on the safe side... add a pinch of care for yourself.
Benny
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Hi I can see you are full of love and you are happy. Nothing should disturb this . There is love here and there is trust and I am sure there is always happiness. Still be on the safe side... add a pinch of care for yourself.
Benny
Comment Written 04-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem!
Also appreciate the wisdom!
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You are welcome.
Benny