Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was fun, and it had a message! I really enjoyed reading this short story of yours. I have usually followed rules. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Carol,

This was a good learning lesson for Noah. If there were no rules there would be chaos everywhere like he found out. Rules are in place for a reason.

I have managed to get myself behind again. I am working part-time and I don't have a lot of time for Fan Story. It makes me sad.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2025

Not to worry ...I am retired and I still can't keep up with everything. I just appreciate what you do when you can.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I was a lot like Noah. I thought rules were just something that needed to be broken, and I broke them all. My parent on the other hand, wished there truly was a planet where they could send. :-) Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

LOl...for some reason I believe that there is some serious truth in your comments, but I am sure when it came down to it, they would never have traded you to another planet. You probably could charm them with your smile.
Smiles, Carol

reply by Ric Myworld on 04-Apr-2025

I was wilder than a choked duck, and they couldn't catch me with a net. So, I left home at 15 and never went back. :-)

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

At 15...brave young man. I waited till the day I turned 18 and walked out the door.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Exceptional

Hi Carol, love this story. Very imaginative and creative. I also like the fact it teaches a good lesson. Well written and very descriptive. Great job. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

This was a nice dramatization on why rules are important and the need for structure in society. Leaving room for critical thinking, as every rule may not be the best to follow.

Kim

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thank you for reading and for understanding the message I hoped it would deliver.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is a wonderfully imaginative story. How do you keep coming up with something to make life better for each child in the story? These stories in a book would be a wonderful learning adventure.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

I think short imaginative stories would help a younger child listen and tuck the information away so when they need that extra bit of encouragement they will remember. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Another good moral here, and not only for children. Life is chaotic and dangerous if rules are not applied and obeyed. Rules are made for the safety and well-being of all, and the sooner that is understood the better society becomes. I think back to the greatest commandment of all ... love the Lord your God with all your heart, and the second follows on naturally (and your neighbour as yourself). Two simple rules, given for our blessing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and enjoy my Alphabet Soup stories. I apprecite it so much as always.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow,you nailed it no rules there is anarchy and chaos and al will crumble apart. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings. This was a fun read.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thank you for reading and for understanding the message I hoped it would deliver.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh yes, rules were made in households to make the home work, lest anyone My be swimming against the tide, they affect everyone, that's why people seeking to rob, destroy and murder are locked up. Beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and enjoy my Alphabet Soup stories. I apprecite it so much as always.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Noah learns an important lesson in this cute story. I like your transition from reality to the land of no rules. One little fix: Noah's final words need a close quotation mark after 'every day.(') I like Noah's rules, too. Nicely done! Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and enjoy my Alphabet Soup stories. I apprecite it so much as always.
Smiles, Carol