Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

All the animals have to serve its species. They do it by reproducing, among other things. Of course, the instinct is to protect the species, so the species, not exactly the individual, can develop. I think it's stupid of humans not to protect humans, as long as the individual means something, since we're not just animals.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This story is engaging on many levels. It uses non-
confusing language making is easy to read and
understand. No photo is needed; your words are ample.
Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

This is an interesting conversation between the narrator and his father, who imparts wisdom via some Platonic style question asking.

Lots of great advice from the old man. The only thing absent was Higgs bosom.

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Though your writing is good, you made this one so long that many won't read it. Even I skipped big bits, which is not my normal habit. Adewpearl (Brooke) told us preferably not more than 16 lines or possibly slightly over. You had also a few to many end rhymes that were the same word,

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

father-son dialogue on the diversity of life and how different beings have different roles in life is excellent .you obviously love and revere nature and are very observant .it has profound wisdom and i feel every one should read it.again a smaller lenght would have appealed to more people because more people should read it .it is a great advice and grwat wisdom.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from beccabootie123

Exceptional

wow this is intense and well thought out. tells a story and the length lends itself to the same. well written and flows easily with lots of life lessons. well done

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for review with highest rating

reply by beccabootie123 on 19-Apr-2013

I did not give it you earned it. great stuff it always is. keep writing I will keep reading. your welcome. Adele

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very wel lwritten, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the diversity of man and nature but it all works together. and each one has his purpose. i enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Another lovely poem with a nice lesson to it. If all of us had to believe that we cant make a difference, this would be a pretty nasty world to live in.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Although this piece is fairly long, it is interesting enough to hold my attention to the end. The writer love of humanity is displayed as the writer delivers a message that is clear cut and passionate.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

You let us have another peek,
behind the magic we all seek.
The father shares world so wide.
and brings a smile one cannot hide.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice poetic review