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Comment from Gert sherwood
Alcreator Litt Dear
It took a while to under stand what you were telling us.
But soon as I realized that to me you were using various formats when writing your own format.
What I liked of how the father and son giving thanks to God for what He Created.
Gert
Smiles to your ending.
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Alcreator Litt Dear
It took a while to under stand what you were telling us.
But soon as I realized that to me you were using various formats when writing your own format.
What I liked of how the father and son giving thanks to God for what He Created.
Gert
Smiles to your ending.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is a long one, but I read it through. Some parts were confusing, but then when a father and son are sharing a conversation it's private to them. A lad learns more from his dad about the life ahead, what he learns from his mother is equally important, though. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
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This is a long one, but I read it through. Some parts were confusing, but then when a father and son are sharing a conversation it's private to them. A lad learns more from his dad about the life ahead, what he learns from his mother is equally important, though. Well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Susan Larson
I gather this is a poem about a conversation between a father and son about life. It just seemed to ramble on and not make a lot of sense. Do you actually read any of these reviews? I've never gotten a reply from you.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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I gather this is a poem about a conversation between a father and son about life. It just seemed to ramble on and not make a lot of sense. Do you actually read any of these reviews? I've never gotten a reply from you.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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T y. Ur wisdom reveals.
ALD
Comment from Nathan J Hope
Hello Alcreator ,
This is so good..
I find it hard to understand it though...
The only thing that I understand Is that a conversation and a bond between Father and Son..
So far it's good..keep writing..Hope you read more from you..
Thank you for sharing
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Hello Alcreator ,
This is so good..
I find it hard to understand it though...
The only thing that I understand Is that a conversation and a bond between Father and Son..
So far it's good..keep writing..Hope you read more from you..
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Senyai
Hi Alcreator,
I found this long poem as a conversation from a concerned father to a son, as though they were walking together on a road in town somewhere. The son asking his diligent father questions about Life. The conversation style of your form, propoetic worked well here while the father was teaching his son important truths to live by to have a long and full filling life.
Long, but some poems just warrant that.
Great long prose-poem about the virtues of living by religious tenet very dear and close to the father being imparted to his questioning young son (of about the age of 12 years perhaps).
Thanks for posting,
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Alcreator,
I found this long poem as a conversation from a concerned father to a son, as though they were walking together on a road in town somewhere. The son asking his diligent father questions about Life. The conversation style of your form, propoetic worked well here while the father was teaching his son important truths to live by to have a long and full filling life.
Long, but some poems just warrant that.
Great long prose-poem about the virtues of living by religious tenet very dear and close to the father being imparted to his questioning young son (of about the age of 12 years perhaps).
Thanks for posting,
All the best,
Senyai
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Honestly speaking, I found it hard to connect individual stanzas and understand the meaning. I could figure out it is about the father-son bond! Fathers and sons can sometimes find it difficult to express their feelings for one another. I see that you have put together some interesting philosophy expressed in the course of conversation between them. Thanks for sharing!
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Honestly speaking, I found it hard to connect individual stanzas and understand the meaning. I could figure out it is about the father-son bond! Fathers and sons can sometimes find it difficult to express their feelings for one another. I see that you have put together some interesting philosophy expressed in the course of conversation between them. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hard to decipher and difficult to read, and I struggled to understand your meaning here. Teaching our children to be honest and have integrity is a never ending job, and we should take a look at our own life first, love Dolly x
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This is hard to decipher and difficult to read, and I struggled to understand your meaning here. Teaching our children to be honest and have integrity is a never ending job, and we should take a look at our own life first, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
What an usual but amazing poem of words and ethics? A father and son relationship are usually to grow and learn something from each other. Your propoetic style is uniquely yours. This poem as you stated is fiction, nonfiction and a poem. Kudos for your journey in words with this piece. The imagery shares the beauty of a tulip through the eyes of the holder. May God always be in your writing who gives all of us His way to share His word. I love your ending where your father asks you, "Is the lesson clear? Yes, he is proud of you and you of him. I think, you may want to not just shorten, but keep your thoughts concise. I love this line, "Love family, neighbors, country and mankind. As much as you can do." Best of luck to your future writings and your future book, "O Life."
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
What an usual but amazing poem of words and ethics? A father and son relationship are usually to grow and learn something from each other. Your propoetic style is uniquely yours. This poem as you stated is fiction, nonfiction and a poem. Kudos for your journey in words with this piece. The imagery shares the beauty of a tulip through the eyes of the holder. May God always be in your writing who gives all of us His way to share His word. I love your ending where your father asks you, "Is the lesson clear? Yes, he is proud of you and you of him. I think, you may want to not just shorten, but keep your thoughts concise. I love this line, "Love family, neighbors, country and mankind. As much as you can do." Best of luck to your future writings and your future book, "O Life."
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
I like some of your work, however, I found this too long and very hard to follow. I wish you would create longer sentences and that your words weren't so disjointed. I do understand what you are trying to say, and this is just my humble opinion for all it's worth.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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I like some of your work, however, I found this too long and very hard to follow. I wish you would create longer sentences and that your words weren't so disjointed. I do understand what you are trying to say, and this is just my humble opinion for all it's worth.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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T y. Ur wisdom reveals. God does jobs brief also. ALD
