Black Phoebe Among the Pigeons
Free verse poem about female black phoebe37 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Wow! This is sad, lonely , but so full of hope. It sends the chills down my spine. It reminds me of hanging on when you are waiting out the mundane. Wonderful piece!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Wow! This is sad, lonely , but so full of hope. It sends the chills down my spine. It reminds me of hanging on when you are waiting out the mundane. Wonderful piece!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
This is nicely done. I enjoyed the lovely flow. We see birds up on wires all the time, how do they manage the vibrations I wonder? How do they balance so well? I hope the weather is better where you are, He have heavy thunderstorms headed our way. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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This is nicely done. I enjoyed the lovely flow. We see birds up on wires all the time, how do they manage the vibrations I wonder? How do they balance so well? I hope the weather is better where you are, He have heavy thunderstorms headed our way. Karen
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your personalized review.
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U R Welcome. Karen
Comment from MissMerri
This free-verse poem is beautiful. The images are so strong and the words are beautiful and so sweetly arranged. It makes reading the poem a very special pleasure, I enjoyed this so much I had to read it again. Perfect!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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This free-verse poem is beautiful. The images are so strong and the words are beautiful and so sweetly arranged. It makes reading the poem a very special pleasure, I enjoyed this so much I had to read it again. Perfect!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your kind words and generous six-star review.
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Crystie, I can agree with Emily Dickinson that hope is the thing wit feathers. We all need a good portion of that these days
I really liked your free verse poem all the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Yes, Crystie, I can agree with Emily Dickinson that hope is the thing wit feathers. We all need a good portion of that these days
I really liked your free verse poem all the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review and the well wishes.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I enjoyed this stanza and made me wonder what will be to see this scene for real 'This phoebe misses the warm winter
she spent in Mexico
but is poised-like hope-among
the portly pigeon matrons."
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed this stanza and made me wonder what will be to see this scene for real 'This phoebe misses the warm winter
she spent in Mexico
but is poised-like hope-among
the portly pigeon matrons."
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thank you for reading and reviewing today!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this piece of free verse for the contest. I honestly had no idea that a phoebe was a kind of bird, so your poem was both entertaining and informative. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed this piece of free verse for the contest. I honestly had no idea that a phoebe was a kind of bird, so your poem was both entertaining and informative. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Sanku
Emily Dickinson is my favourite poet .Her Hope is ... is such a beautiful poem That i have never forgotten its end line.. 'never asked for a crumb'
This is a very nice poem about phoebe and how she waits chaperoned by pigeons for its mate.I liked the line ,"Huddled in a patient train of thought'
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Emily Dickinson is my favourite poet .Her Hope is ... is such a beautiful poem That i have never forgotten its end line.. 'never asked for a crumb'
This is a very nice poem about phoebe and how she waits chaperoned by pigeons for its mate.I liked the line ,"Huddled in a patient train of thought'
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your detailed review.
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Chrystie,
Hope truly is a thing with feathers. I love the inspiration I get when the birds migrate back in the summer here. You have some wonderful imagery and alliteration in this free verse poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Hi Chrystie,
Hope truly is a thing with feathers. I love the inspiration I get when the birds migrate back in the summer here. You have some wonderful imagery and alliteration in this free verse poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this poem about birds, especially the black phoebe bird. I like the image of pigeons as matrons watching over her a much more likable image than thinking of them as the rats of the bird world!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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i like this poem about birds, especially the black phoebe bird. I like the image of pigeons as matrons watching over her a much more likable image than thinking of them as the rats of the bird world!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your personalized review.
Comment from June Sargent
I like this gypsy of the pigeon family. She's round and dainty, unlike the pigeons we see here. Your free verse highlights this beauty who likes especially to vacation in Mexico.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I like this gypsy of the pigeon family. She's round and dainty, unlike the pigeons we see here. Your free verse highlights this beauty who likes especially to vacation in Mexico.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your super review.
