Time of Life
A mother's countdown of the short time she had with her son2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
That would be so heartbreaking, devastating, and damn near soul breaking, for those who have had to endure this, welcome to FS. before I forget, bit wrapped up in your story, an excellent though sad read for this prompt, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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That would be so heartbreaking, devastating, and damn near soul breaking, for those who have had to endure this, welcome to FS. before I forget, bit wrapped up in your story, an excellent though sad read for this prompt, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for reading my story and leaving such a thoughtful review! I look forward to entering more contests :)
Comment from Julie G1
This story invokes an empathetic response to the prompt. The situation is well described with the story skilfully blending time with emotional reactions. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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This story invokes an empathetic response to the prompt. The situation is well described with the story skilfully blending time with emotional reactions. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much! I appreciate you reading my story and leaving thoughtful feedback :)
