Puddles Are Fun
1-7-1 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is full of joy! I love how you share that carefree feeling of jumping through puddles as a child. Just living in the moment. The repetition of "Jump!" adds so much excitement! I can almost hear the splash! This little poem is bursting with life - such a fun read!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Your poem is full of joy! I love how you share that carefree feeling of jumping through puddles as a child. Just living in the moment. The repetition of "Jump!" adds so much excitement! I can almost hear the splash! This little poem is bursting with life - such a fun read!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This childish pursuit has a carefree theme as we care not for the splash and how damaging it can be when we jump in a puddle, I enjoyed the positivity here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This childish pursuit has a carefree theme as we care not for the splash and how damaging it can be when we jump in a puddle, I enjoyed the positivity here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you
