I Bear Glad Tidings
We love each other more than we can bear3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think it's the Betsy Bear than does it for me! The visual is delightful and your fun and frivolous little verse complements it well. I like the way your 1-7-1 starts and finishes with two different definitions for the word 'bear.' Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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I think it's the Betsy Bear than does it for me! The visual is delightful and your fun and frivolous little verse complements it well. I like the way your 1-7-1 starts and finishes with two different definitions for the word 'bear.' Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from LJbutterfly
What an adorable poem and adorable picture for the contest, with a clever play on words. Your poem has the correct syllable count, but my thoughts were:
Bear
with me my dear wife Betsy
Bear
The syllable count stays the same. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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What an adorable poem and adorable picture for the contest, with a clever play on words. Your poem has the correct syllable count, but my thoughts were:
Bear
with me my dear wife Betsy
Bear
The syllable count stays the same. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cute birthday card type poem as we love our greetings cards with a little bit of humour and your brought a smile with this one, good luck with it, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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This is a cute birthday card type poem as we love our greetings cards with a little bit of humour and your brought a smile with this one, good luck with it, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Dolly.
