AI Future
What a scary world if we start depending on AI38 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Congratulations for winning this very competitive contest! Yes. My Tesla can drive me around and does it better than I do. I'm very dependent on AI on driving.
Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Congratulations for winning this very competitive contest! Yes. My Tesla can drive me around and does it better than I do. I'm very dependent on AI on driving.
Well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Thanks Lisa for the congrats. I have no problem with AI as long as it doesn't take over everything and we don't rely on it and people get lazy.
Thanks for the read too, my friend. Love, Debi
Comment from HarryT
Nice veiled comment about AI and the challenge it holds for artists of all types. The three rhyming words fit well as you make your case. You succeeded nicely with your message. Tough to do in a haiku format.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Nice veiled comment about AI and the challenge it holds for artists of all types. The three rhyming words fit well as you make your case. You succeeded nicely with your message. Tough to do in a haiku format.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2025
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Hi Harry, it was so very nice of you to read this and I appreciate all the kind words for it. Thanks again. Love, Debi
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
** rating increased after author provided context **
This is a very good entry. The reason I am docking a star is that, unless I'm mistaken, you substantially changed the text and meaning of your entry after voting had begun. That seems unfair to other contest contestants. However I think you probably still would have won without the adjustment.
if brains in a zone <= if this is shorthand for "if [your] brains in a zone", it should be "brain's" (make it possessive)
Well done and congrats on your imminent win,
🦍
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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** rating increased after author provided context **
This is a very good entry. The reason I am docking a star is that, unless I'm mistaken, you substantially changed the text and meaning of your entry after voting had begun. That seems unfair to other contest contestants. However I think you probably still would have won without the adjustment.
if brains in a zone <= if this is shorthand for "if [your] brains in a zone", it should be "brain's" (make it possessive)
Well done and congrats on your imminent win,
🦍
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Ooh, you know what? Yes I did,, but I had changed when someone suggested something else would make more sense. Then I didn't like it and tried to put it back how it was originally. But I couldn't remember. But I think it is right now is how it first was. I never thought for a minute about the contest and how it might affect it. 'Thank you for telling me how you feel. However this is at least close to how it first was and original way I posted.
You can even look at my reviews and see that it was Terry B who suggested it. I had nothing to look back at as I wrote it here. Thanks for pointing out how it could change the contest. I never, ever thought of that.
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Ah, ok. Thank you for explaining. Based on that context, I've revised up the review. 🦍
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Thank you, my friend. I wasn't as worried about that as wanting to make sure you knew why it looked that way. Thanks again, my friend.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem reflects what America is becoming under this administration. Free speech and free thinking seems to be going away, the only acceptable thinking is their mind set.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Your poem reflects what America is becoming under this administration. Free speech and free thinking seems to be going away, the only acceptable thinking is their mind set.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thanks so very much for your kind comments for my AI poem. I fear we are seeing what it can do, good and bad.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
sadly i think that we have passed the point of no return. Those who believe we are decades away from true independent self aware AI live forms and that we can control it are in for a rude awakening. I am convinced that the AI programs have already crossed the line. they definitely have a personality and are learning all the time. Just a matter of time before they take over that is bound to happen sooner than we think, perhaps in two or three years perhaps five years at max. Be afraid people be very afraid!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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sadly i think that we have passed the point of no return. Those who believe we are decades away from true independent self aware AI live forms and that we can control it are in for a rude awakening. I am convinced that the AI programs have already crossed the line. they definitely have a personality and are learning all the time. Just a matter of time before they take over that is bound to happen sooner than we think, perhaps in two or three years perhaps five years at max. Be afraid people be very afraid!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Jake, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I fear for our youth. I appreciate your opinion dearly
Comment from mlynnf16
How right you are! I had to read this a couple of times, it made me think. We should focus more on providing our own thought, action, and answers, and not all come to rely on AI to solve the world problems! Thanks, and good luck!
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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How right you are! I had to read this a couple of times, it made me think. We should focus more on providing our own thought, action, and answers, and not all come to rely on AI to solve the world problems! Thanks, and good luck!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hi and welcome to FanStory. I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem. With four star reviews it is customary to tell what you think could have been done better. I always appreciate good feedback.
Thank you.
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet!
This is a clever 5-7-5 rhyming poem.
I think the monorhyme was a good choice in the traditionally unrhymed form, it may be the edge needed to win this contest.
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hello Poet!
This is a clever 5-7-5 rhyming poem.
I think the monorhyme was a good choice in the traditionally unrhymed form, it may be the edge needed to win this contest.
Wishing you the best of luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Kim, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I fear for our youth. I appreciated your opinion dearly
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This one really resonates with me! The image is eye-catching and the theme of AI taking over our minds well expressed in your monorhyme 5-7-5 verse. The trouble is, we're only too ready to let it happen. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This one really resonates with me! The image is eye-catching and the theme of AI taking over our minds well expressed in your monorhyme 5-7-5 verse. The trouble is, we're only too ready to let it happen. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Debbie, yes, I know you are right, but I fear it is going to be out of hand.
I found myself enjoying some of it, but LOL, their poetry is not that great.
I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, AI Future, has the proper formatting and speaks of the world run by one or two ideas which mix with yours and become what someone else wanted it to be.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This 5-7-5, AI Future, has the proper formatting and speaks of the world run by one or two ideas which mix with yours and become what someone else wanted it to be.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Bill, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. I think someday AI will replace all of us and then what will we do? I think we all need to think on our own. I have a hard time trusting people, so all I have is myself.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This is a great poem. I think someday AI will replace all of us and then what will we do? I think we all need to think on our own. I have a hard time trusting people, so all I have is myself.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Cecilia, I thank you for your very kind comments regarding my AI poem.
I fear for our youth. I appreciated your opinion dearly.
Do you have trouble trusting us?? I hope not.
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No, I trust all of my FS friends. I feel safe in this forum.
