It is Easy to get Spooked
a 5-7-5 syllable poem6 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Oooh, this is creepy. Creepiness delivered in so few syllables so you have nailed it, dear mystery poet. I like the presentation too. Wishing you best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Oooh, this is creepy. Creepiness delivered in so few syllables so you have nailed it, dear mystery poet. I like the presentation too. Wishing you best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much. I tried to show the creepiness. Glad you picked up on it. I posted the poem on Facebook and every one's reply was I'm never alone.
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Lol
Comment from kahpot
And a quite scary attempt, and an excellent 5-7-5 poem, all lines connected to tell a story, so very well written, great choice of artwork, a wonderful entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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And a quite scary attempt, and an excellent 5-7-5 poem, all lines connected to tell a story, so very well written, great choice of artwork, a wonderful entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, I appreciate it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. You did a good job on what sounds like your first attempt at a 17 syllable poem. Very descriptive and moody. the only suggestion i have would be to increase your font size a little to make it easier on your reader's eyes. There are a few on here who won't review if your font is too small due to their eye issues. Very good job. Hope you will keep honing your 5-7-5 skills.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. You did a good job on what sounds like your first attempt at a 17 syllable poem. Very descriptive and moody. the only suggestion i have would be to increase your font size a little to make it easier on your reader's eyes. There are a few on here who won't review if your font is too small due to their eye issues. Very good job. Hope you will keep honing your 5-7-5 skills.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you I thought my font was large but it is always hard to tell
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with this 5-7-5 poem! You got the syllable count right for the writing prompt. The poem was so chilling. You did a great job expressing that feeling with so few syllables. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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You did a great job with this 5-7-5 poem! You got the syllable count right for the writing prompt. The poem was so chilling. You did a great job expressing that feeling with so few syllables. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love your poem. You managed to set this scene with just a few words. The way you describe the cool air brushing your hair makes it feel so real. Like I'm right there with you. I'm curious about who you're not alone with. It leaves me wanting more! Great work!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I love your poem. You managed to set this scene with just a few words. The way you describe the cool air brushing your hair makes it feel so real. Like I'm right there with you. I'm curious about who you're not alone with. It leaves me wanting more! Great work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much.
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I don't like being alone at night outside, but I am never spooked inside unless the electricity fails! Ha ha ha, a spooky post for the contest, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I don't like being alone at night outside, but I am never spooked inside unless the electricity fails! Ha ha ha, a spooky post for the contest, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you. IT is always challenging to write a 5-7-5 poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
