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Harvest Time

markette poem

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This markette poem, Harvest Time, has the proper formatting and glories in the tremendous beaming lights from the sky which make the gleaners grin and bundle sheaves.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from Karen Cherry
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Nice poem. You did not include in the authors notes just what a markette poem is. I have no idea what it is . There are over 300 types of poetry. I have made two of them myself. "The Limericky" were the meter is not strict, and the words can kinda sorta match. And, the "BeginAgain: named for Carol. Each next line starts with the word from the line above it.

Carol wrote lots of great stuff.
Stuff we all wanted to do.
Do you think I'll ever be as good?
Good gravy that will take work. Karen

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Oh I always forget to do that .mainly because it is a club entry.I just presume it will show the details ...These are stanzas with aaab ,bbbc, dddf...etcand Syllable count is 11,10,9, 5.respectively ...I will be more careful next time..Thank you very much for stopping by .
    how is your sister's eyes? Hope they are fine. Please take care.
reply by Karen Cherry on 01-Apr-2025
    My sister is doing better. She is not a good patient. The doctor says she is doing fine, the second eye just will take a bit longer to heal. Tammy should not of had the two surgeries so close together.
    Karen
Comment from jaded831
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This poem shows how God provides for us. He helps those who help themselves. While providing His children with special rewards for doing the right thing. Each season has its own reward.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Comment from lyenochka
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You did a great job with this Markette poem, Santha. I liked how you showed us the ephemeral nature of humans in the harvest season but they thank God for His extra care in "loading lunar lights with extra gleam" to celebrate this busy season.
On suggestion:
on each farmers face (farmer's)

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much Helen. April is the rice harvest season here in Kerala, after that there is the harvest festival which is called VISHU It falls on April14th
reply by lyenochka on 01-Apr-2025
    Ah, good to know! It's a time of celebration for many cultures. Are you in Kerala? I knew you were from there but I thought you were in Tamil Nadu or somewhere away from your origins.
Comment from royowen
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Who knows the mind of God, the longer I remain in His power I am constantly amazed at how He makes order out of disorder, and how His will is unerringly correct, the longer I serve the more amazed I am, this is beautifully written Santha, bless you Roy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you once again Roy for these golden stars..
reply by royowen on 01-Apr-2025
    Most welcome
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Such lovely imagery this poem brings to mind. These are my favorite lines:

Paddy fields sway in the wind like emerald sea
as if bowing to the glory of Thee

Nice overall presentation as well. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much for stopping by..Thank you for selecting your fav.. lines..
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are uplifting, descriptive and creative. The poem
was festive and we need more of this today. The author's words were
expressed well with details, lights and color. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem
well. Great Poem, Sanku!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much for stopping by .I appreciate the support . God Bless !
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I enjoyed this wonderful poem. One spag or maybe it isn't. Beatific and not beautific? I'll go and look it up. The imagery was detailed and easy to visualize. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    It is beatific meaning 'feeling blissful happiness' There is an element of 'god's blessing ' too .
    Thank you very much for stopping by..
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I absolutely loved the imagery. I like the rhyming style you used. The rhymes were not strained they flew off the page.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much for these encouraging review .I am lad you enjoyed the imagery..
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is a great celebration of life within this poem and I enjoyed the harvest here as we give thanks to the glory in the fields and the fruit on the trees, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much Dolly for stopping by.