Bubble on The Wind
Afraid to drift up high without support15 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Congratulations on your contest win. Your poem employs some innovative happenings with the spider webs. Good metre and rhymes and a fun tale.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Congratulations on your contest win. Your poem employs some innovative happenings with the spider webs. Good metre and rhymes and a fun tale.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hi Gloria, You definitely made me smile with the awesome review and congratulations! I'm honored! Thank you so much! :o) Helvi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
What a fun poem for a child. Congratulations on your contest win! It isn't easy to write for a child without sounding "childish" but you did a great job. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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What a fun poem for a child. Congratulations on your contest win! It isn't easy to write for a child without sounding "childish" but you did a great job. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Marilyn, for the review and the congratulations! I'm glad you had fun with this! :o) Helvi
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Bubble on the Wind, presented with ten ABCB-rhymed quatrains, shows the impulsive bubble finding a partner and achieving heights that he might never had reached alone.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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This poem, Bubble on the Wind, presented with ten ABCB-rhymed quatrains, shows the impulsive bubble finding a partner and achieving heights that he might never had reached alone.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hi Bill, By the 5 star rating I have the feeling you enjoyed my poem! Hop it brought a smile your way! Thank you for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from June Sargent
I really enjoyed this poem for children, as it opens up a whole new world of imagination. Perfect rhythm and rhyme to create beautiful imagery. Well done !
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed this poem for children, as it opens up a whole new world of imagination. Perfect rhythm and rhyme to create beautiful imagery. Well done !
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hi June, I definitely wanted this to be a fun poem for a child to read! Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
Comment from royowen
Yes, there was a Scottish poet Robbie Burns, who was also a king of Scotland, who being beaten once again by the British, escaped from the battle, and hiding in a cave he spied a spider, weaving its web, not succeeding several time to secure its web, eventually it succeeded, encouraged by this he met the British in battle and defeated them, don't give up is the message, beautifully wrutten my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Yes, there was a Scottish poet Robbie Burns, who was also a king of Scotland, who being beaten once again by the British, escaped from the battle, and hiding in a cave he spied a spider, weaving its web, not succeeding several time to secure its web, eventually it succeeded, encouraged by this he met the British in battle and defeated them, don't give up is the message, beautifully wrutten my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Roy thank you for sharing the story of Robbie Burns. You never know where the inspiration to continue will come from . You expressed that well in this brief note. I' m happy you found that message within my poem.I also hope you found it to be enjoyable! Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
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Well done
Comment from Benny Beeharry
A beautiful write that makes wrought want to know what happens next. Besides it was meant for a child , more difficult because children gets bored easily. I was not bored and read to the end. Children stories are all fantasy like and imaginative, and that's what the poem is.
Benny
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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A beautiful write that makes wrought want to know what happens next. Besides it was meant for a child , more difficult because children gets bored easily. I was not bored and read to the end. Children stories are all fantasy like and imaginative, and that's what the poem is.
Benny
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Benny, your review definitely made me smile! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem and it didn't leave you bored! :o) Thanks for the great review! :o)
Comment from Harry Craft
This is a great poem for a child and the rhyming scheme is great as well. I enjoyed reading how the bubble and spider help each other to reach new heights. The photo is awesome too! Keep up the wonderful work!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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This is a great poem for a child and the rhyming scheme is great as well. I enjoyed reading how the bubble and spider help each other to reach new heights. The photo is awesome too! Keep up the wonderful work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Harry, I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the great review! :o)
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
What a great poem to fill a child with joy. I loved the bubble and its fears. Then the spider befriending the bubble was a nice touch. I'm assuming you entered the contest? if so, good luck.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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What a great poem to fill a child with joy. I loved the bubble and its fears. Then the spider befriending the bubble was a nice touch. I'm assuming you entered the contest? if so, good luck.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Kristen, I did enter the contest but can't tell you who I am right now. Thank you for your wonderful review ot means a lot! :o)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Bubbles don't last that long so you asking it to perform a major task here before it pops. I enjoyed the humour and lighthearted theme to your poem here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Bubbles don't last that long so you asking it to perform a major task here before it pops. I enjoyed the humour and lighthearted theme to your poem here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Dolly, I'm so glad you enjoyed the humor. Thanks for the great review! :o)
Comment from Karen Cherry
This is a good story that children will like. They can see that problems need not remain so. Please pass this along. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
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This is a good story that children will like. They can see that problems need not remain so. Please pass this along. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
