Trust
Poem 5/7/512 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Many people struggle to trust again, once they've been betrayed. You did a wonderful job with this contest entry saying that. I enjoyed reading adn want to wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Many people struggle to trust again, once they've been betrayed. You did a wonderful job with this contest entry saying that. I enjoyed reading adn want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Trust, has the proper formatting and presents a well-known fact that relates to the term "Once bitten, twice shy". No one wants to lead with their chin.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This 5-7-5, Trust, has the proper formatting and presents a well-known fact that relates to the term "Once bitten, twice shy". No one wants to lead with their chin.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Sanku
This is absolutely true .You have hit the nail hard in three short strikes. I loved your presentation too The paper torn into half says a lot all the best for the contest..
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is absolutely true .You have hit the nail hard in three short strikes. I loved your presentation too The paper torn into half says a lot all the best for the contest..
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi definitely! I would not trust a person who sold me down the next market or be a traitor to me. I have given up friends who have this to me.those were the ones I used to appreciate.
Trust is hard to come by these days. I have stopped looking for it and make my own way.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Hi definitely! I would not trust a person who sold me down the next market or be a traitor to me. I have given up friends who have this to me.those were the ones I used to appreciate.
Trust is hard to come by these days. I have stopped looking for it and make my own way.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Harry Craft
I truly agree with this very short, but very real poem. This should win the contest because it is so real and the meaning of the word trust on the torn paper says it all. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I truly agree with this very short, but very real poem. This should win the contest because it is so real and the meaning of the word trust on the torn paper says it all. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great reveiw zanya
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is very short but to the point. It's great because it is so true. Trust will be on shaky front once another has betrayed them. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is very short but to the point. It's great because it is so true. Trust will be on shaky front once another has betrayed them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Karen Cherry
Truer words were never spoken.
"Sorry," says he once.
She forgives as she was taught.
Divorced next time, though.
Please pass this along. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Truer words were never spoken.
"Sorry," says he once.
She forgives as she was taught.
Divorced next time, though.
Please pass this along. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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Comment from nancyjam
A short but powerful 5-7-5 on betrayal. It is so true. How can you trust
someone after they have betrayed you. I t would take time and a generous heart. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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A short but powerful 5-7-5 on betrayal. It is so true. How can you trust
someone after they have betrayed you. I t would take time and a generous heart. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem. The way you share the feeling of betrayal in such a short poem is powerful. "Distorted after an act of betrayal" really makes me think about how trust can be broken so easily. And how hard it is to rebuild. Great job!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem. The way you share the feeling of betrayal in such a short poem is powerful. "Distorted after an act of betrayal" really makes me think about how trust can be broken so easily. And how hard it is to rebuild. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great review zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. A perfect use of your 5-7-5 syllables to create such a powerful message. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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An excellent entry for the Betrayal Poetry contest. A perfect use of your 5-7-5 syllables to create such a powerful message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
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Thanks for reveiwing zanya
