Daffodils
Spring flowers36 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem paints a picture. I see the daffodils swaying and feel the breeze. It gives a mini vacation from winter's wrath. The picture is bright and cheery very spring like. Together they are awesome.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Your poem paints a picture. I see the daffodils swaying and feel the breeze. It gives a mini vacation from winter's wrath. The picture is bright and cheery very spring like. Together they are awesome.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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jaded,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. I am trying to bring spring to those of you still under snow.
Cecilia
Comment from jake cosmos aller
cool photos and image. Daffodils and other flowers herald Spring and summer just around the corner. the Cherry trees are beginning to bloom will reach their peak in a few days here in Korea.
interesting factoid. the famous cherry trees in DC were a gift from the Emperor of Japan to the US for decades people thought they came from Japan they actually came from Korea which was a Japanese colony by then. no one knew that until recently.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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cool photos and image. Daffodils and other flowers herald Spring and summer just around the corner. the Cherry trees are beginning to bloom will reach their peak in a few days here in Korea.
interesting factoid. the famous cherry trees in DC were a gift from the Emperor of Japan to the US for decades people thought they came from Japan they actually came from Korea which was a Japanese colony by then. no one knew that until recently.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Jake,
Thank you for the wonderful review. That i an interesting fact about the cherry tre. Who knew?
Well done
Cecilia
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lots of hidden history all over the place
Comment from harmony13
The author's poem is filled with color and thoughts of Spring. The
poem is uplifting and makes one think of the beauty of Spring. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem well.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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The author's poem is filled with color and thoughts of Spring. The
poem is uplifting and makes one think of the beauty of Spring. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments
this poem well.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Harmony,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It a a fun poem tonwrite
Cecilia
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Cecilia,
I love the optimism for Spring. We're still in snow here in Alaska, but I'm trying to be hopeful, too. Daffodils are delightful!
This is a lovely 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing!
Kim
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Cecilia,
I love the optimism for Spring. We're still in snow here in Alaska, but I'm trying to be hopeful, too. Daffodils are delightful!
This is a lovely 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing!
Kim
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Dovey,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am sorry you still have snow. In Texas it has been in the high 80's and low 90's.
Cecilia
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Daffodils, has the proper formatting and announces the entering of the Spring season with a display of the beautiful daffodils. So nice.........
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This 5-7-5, Daffodils, has the proper formatting and announces the entering of the Spring season with a display of the beautiful daffodils. So nice.........
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Bill,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It was a fun one to write.
Cecilia
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great work with this piece Cecilia. Enjoyed the imagery you used of flowers popping and daffodils smiling to describe how you feel about Spring. This was a very delightful poem to read.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Great work with this piece Cecilia. Enjoyed the imagery you used of flowers popping and daffodils smiling to describe how you feel about Spring. This was a very delightful poem to read.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Justin,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Here in Texas we went from winter to summer. Skipped the spring altogether. It's going to be another hot summer.
Cecilia
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You're welcome. Cecilia.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
I sense spring, hope, and joy in this short haiku. It makes me feel so peaceful. The presentation compliments the poem very well. Wonderful read for a Saturday afternoon. Thank you!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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I sense spring, hope, and joy in this short haiku. It makes me feel so peaceful. The presentation compliments the poem very well. Wonderful read for a Saturday afternoon. Thank you!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Anna,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Hopefully you live somewhere that spring has come to stay. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Cecilia
Comment from Teri7
Cecilia, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the lovely daffodils as they sway and bring a smile and sunshine to our faces. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Cecilia, This is a very beautiful and well written 5-7-5 poem about the lovely daffodils as they sway and bring a smile and sunshine to our faces. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Teri,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Trying to bring a little spring to everyone.
Cecilia
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My friend you always bring sunshine in this place when it may seem a little gloomy. Blessings, Teri
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thank you I appreciate the sentiment.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
What a lovely poem! You wrote a nice poem using effective imagery and rhyme. The lines "Flower beds popping/ Daffodils smile as they sway" create a very nice image, instantly transporting the reader to a vibrant, springtime scene. The simplicity of the words, paired with the lively rhythm, perfectly captures the essence of the season. Bye line " Spring is here to stay" brings a sense of war and reassurance, making the poem both bright and uplifting. The presentation of the poem flows beautifully, with each image building on the last to evoke feelings of renewal and joy. Nicely done!
The choice of daffodils as a central image is particularly fitting, symbolizing hope and new beginnings. Your ability to create such a vivid, joyful atmosphere in such a short space is impressive. I also appreciate how the poem has a natural rhythm that mirrors the gentle movement of flowers in the breeze. Overall, it's a delightful read, full of warmth and positivity, leaving the reader with a smile.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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What a lovely poem! You wrote a nice poem using effective imagery and rhyme. The lines "Flower beds popping/ Daffodils smile as they sway" create a very nice image, instantly transporting the reader to a vibrant, springtime scene. The simplicity of the words, paired with the lively rhythm, perfectly captures the essence of the season. Bye line " Spring is here to stay" brings a sense of war and reassurance, making the poem both bright and uplifting. The presentation of the poem flows beautifully, with each image building on the last to evoke feelings of renewal and joy. Nicely done!
The choice of daffodils as a central image is particularly fitting, symbolizing hope and new beginnings. Your ability to create such a vivid, joyful atmosphere in such a short space is impressive. I also appreciate how the poem has a natural rhythm that mirrors the gentle movement of flowers in the breeze. Overall, it's a delightful read, full of warmth and positivity, leaving the reader with a smile.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Jacquelyn,
Thank you for the lovely review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
Cecilia
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Cecilia.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of personification to describe
the swaying daffodils and the flower beds.
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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-Very nice image and presentation, Cecilia.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of personification to describe
the swaying daffodils and the flower beds.
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Pam,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem.
Cecilia
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You are very welcome, Cecilia.
