I Dream
The soothing balm of calm26 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
I liked this poem. It was calming and can see why it was the winner. Love the image ( very calming). good rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I liked this poem. It was calming and can see why it was the winner. Love the image ( very calming). good rhyming pattern. Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Hi Barry, You just let me know The poem came across just the way I wanted it too! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the great review and congratulations! :o) Helvi
Comment from G0dd0ll
This is a very sweet poem! You have captured the simplicity of our every day lives that everyone seems to forget exists much. You didn't have to stretch your rhymes and you kept a good measure as well. Kudos
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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This is a very sweet poem! You have captured the simplicity of our every day lives that everyone seems to forget exists much. You didn't have to stretch your rhymes and you kept a good measure as well. Kudos
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi GOddOll,,I'm so glad you enjoyed! Thank you for the lovely review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Nicki.B
This is absolutely true, if we just stand still for a moment and listen to the sounds around us, we will be pleasantly surprised what we will find.
This is a wonderful poem. It was great flow and rhyme with a lovely complimentary picture and presentation. And a great sentiment.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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This is absolutely true, if we just stand still for a moment and listen to the sounds around us, we will be pleasantly surprised what we will find.
This is a wonderful poem. It was great flow and rhyme with a lovely complimentary picture and presentation. And a great sentiment.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Nicki , I've always loved the sound of melodious poems. I also love the sounds and sights of nature. When I need to find tranquility, a bright , warm sunny day always lifts my spirits. When you find peace inside it's easy to pass it on to someone else. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for the lovely review!
:o) Helvi
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You are a breath of fresh air Helvi and I love your view ans I agree, I live by the seaside and I've always said its my therapy, the sights, sounds, smells it just puts me at ease!
Take care x
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You too! :o)
Comment from tfawcus
Very nicely constructed with a melodious flow. The repetition works well without being invasive. I'm glad to see that this won the contest. A most deserving win and a worthy subject for your poem.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Very nicely constructed with a melodious flow. The repetition works well without being invasive. I'm glad to see that this won the contest. A most deserving win and a worthy subject for your poem.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi tfawcus Thank you so much for the totally awesome review and congratulations for the contest! I'm thrilled you felt I deserved both these honors!
:o) Helvi
Comment from Raul1
This is a beautiful and wonderful repetition poetry. I have enjoyed reading your poem. It speaks of beautiful things and it is positive all the way. Interesting. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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This is a beautiful and wonderful repetition poetry. I have enjoyed reading your poem. It speaks of beautiful things and it is positive all the way. Interesting. Excellent work! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Raul, thank you so much for your lovely review! :o) Helvi
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You're welcome!
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a splendid job on this repetition poem, cleverly weaving in the repeated line of dreaming of lovely sights and sounds, great use of 8686 abcb rhyme, smoothly written in the style and way of amazing grace, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I think you've done a splendid job on this repetition poem, cleverly weaving in the repeated line of dreaming of lovely sights and sounds, great use of 8686 abcb rhyme, smoothly written in the style and way of amazing grace, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Roy! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :o)
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Most welcome
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Repetition Poem writing prompt. i enjoyed this poem with is smooth, relaxing flow and lovely rhymes. I thought you chose a good line to use as your repetition. Nice presentation as well. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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An excellent entry for the Repetition Poem writing prompt. i enjoyed this poem with is smooth, relaxing flow and lovely rhymes. I thought you chose a good line to use as your repetition. Nice presentation as well. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much Marilyn! I'm glad you enjoyed! :o)
Comment from Sally Law
I just voted for your beautiful poem. Please forgive my lack of a six. But I hope my vote will allow you to win in the contest. A winner in my eyes, nonetheless. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I just voted for your beautiful poem. Please forgive my lack of a six. But I hope my vote will allow you to win in the contest. A winner in my eyes, nonetheless. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Sally, I'm honored on both counts! Knowing you voted for me and thought this deserved 6 stars is incredibly awesome! Thank you soooo much Sally! :o)
Comment from Karen Cherry
The poem is well done, and with you lovely picture I can almost smell the little forest. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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The poem is well done, and with you lovely picture I can almost smell the little forest. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Karen, I'll definitely say a prayer for your sister. I know it has to be difficult when you're in a situation like that! Hope her problem clears up soon! :o) Thank you for not only taking the time to review but also leaving a great review behind! :o)
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Thanks for the prayers. You write well. Karen
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, uplifting, descriptive and creative. I
enjoyed the read of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes -
they speak volumes! As I read these words, they gave me a comforting
and calming feeling. The artwork is awesome and adds to the calmness
and scene in these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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The author's words are lovely, uplifting, descriptive and creative. I
enjoyed the read of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes -
they speak volumes! As I read these words, they gave me a comforting
and calming feeling. The artwork is awesome and adds to the calmness
and scene in these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hi Harmony, I'm so glad my poem had a calming affect on you! It's very nice knowing you can pass on those feelings. Thank you so much for your lovely review! :o)
