Scene of Cast Meeting 2
a scene with Pons and Ned et al12 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL oh dear. What a group of mis-breeds lol This line had me rolling for some reason.
Pallas : Was that woman wearin' a pickle suit or somethin'?
Your mind is a treasure. Best to keep it buried. LOL (just kidding) Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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LOL oh dear. What a group of mis-breeds lol This line had me rolling for some reason.
Pallas : Was that woman wearin' a pickle suit or somethin'?
Your mind is a treasure. Best to keep it buried. LOL (just kidding) Enjoyed!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I feel like a million dollars. Green and wrinkled.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Cast: "Ned as Hisself" is this as you intended?
OMG your script is so funny. I just read Helen's script...they are similar ... I thought it was part of a multi-author book.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Cast: "Ned as Hisself" is this as you intended?
OMG your script is so funny. I just read Helen's script...they are similar ... I thought it was part of a multi-author book.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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For some reason Helen posted my original script after I posted the revision of it with more characters. Yes, "hisself" refers to Ned's character.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a conversation I used have with my Grandma as she was quite deaf and tried to lip read and she never quite understand what we were saying. You took misinterpretation to another level here Bill and made us all laugh with this couple of pranksters, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This sounds like a conversation I used have with my Grandma as she was quite deaf and tried to lip read and she never quite understand what we were saying. You took misinterpretation to another level here Bill and made us all laugh with this couple of pranksters, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Dolly, for giving this a look.
Comment from kahpot
i am glad to see the lingo, misinterpretations, and misunderstandings is back, and yet Pons and Ned still have that unique understanding, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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i am glad to see the lingo, misinterpretations, and misunderstandings is back, and yet Pons and Ned still have that unique understanding, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank youm, kahpot
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Hahaha, Price is Right, huh? This is so incredibly hilarious.
I do have to say that I had to keep looking up to see who was speaking. I am sure after I read a couple I will know these guys by heart. I loved this Bill. You are so darn creative and funny.
These guys are like watching the Three Stooges X 3.
I'm waiting for Pallas to say, "Ohh, wise guy, eh!"
And under your lead it is just so very amusing.
I cannot wait to read the next one. I will be watching closely for these great scenes you put on. These guys along with your own character is so entertaining. Thanks Bill. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Hahaha, Price is Right, huh? This is so incredibly hilarious.
I do have to say that I had to keep looking up to see who was speaking. I am sure after I read a couple I will know these guys by heart. I loved this Bill. You are so darn creative and funny.
These guys are like watching the Three Stooges X 3.
I'm waiting for Pallas to say, "Ohh, wise guy, eh!"
And under your lead it is just so very amusing.
I cannot wait to read the next one. I will be watching closely for these great scenes you put on. These guys along with your own character is so entertaining. Thanks Bill. Love, Debi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Debi. I hope I can get them out of these chairs and into the story.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I loved "It's like listening to bowling on the radio, only worse." And I like how Pons always wants to protect Ned. But I don't think not stopping at the stop sign would mean any arrest would be made. Well, unless DOGE wanted to get someone.
The crime here is your getting paid (you're)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Lol. I loved "It's like listening to bowling on the radio, only worse." And I like how Pons always wants to protect Ned. But I don't think not stopping at the stop sign would mean any arrest would be made. Well, unless DOGE wanted to get someone.
The crime here is your getting paid (you're)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I disagree with your spelling correction, Helen. But, I suppose it's a tossup.
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😂
Comment from nomi338
Your depriving me of a set to where somebody, anybody winds up with at least a nosebleed is a crime as I see it. All the tough talk wit nary a punch being launched is a waste of time and effort.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Your depriving me of a set to where somebody, anybody winds up with at least a nosebleed is a crime as I see it. All the tough talk wit nary a punch being launched is a waste of time and effort.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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The character in question was found in a nearby dumpster later. Said he fell in.
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I will accept that. Thank you.
Comment from jim vecchio
Ned tells a story the same roundbout way as my daughter. It's a good thing he wasn't watching a baseball game. First they want to kill an umpire, then a guy is dead on second base and instead of playing the game, the outfielders are catching flies.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Ned tells a story the same roundbout way as my daughter. It's a good thing he wasn't watching a baseball game. First they want to kill an umpire, then a guy is dead on second base and instead of playing the game, the outfielders are catching flies.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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...and Hoo's on first.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really had fun with your story! The dialogue made me chuckle. I loved the randomness of the "crime" Ned discovered. The way everyone has their own little quirks - especially the confusion over what the crime actually is - was hilarious! Your dialogue feels real, like a group of people bouncing off each other, and I liked how you didn't rush things. It's a fun read - I'm excited to see where it goes next! Keep it up!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I really had fun with your story! The dialogue made me chuckle. I loved the randomness of the "crime" Ned discovered. The way everyone has their own little quirks - especially the confusion over what the crime actually is - was hilarious! Your dialogue feels real, like a group of people bouncing off each other, and I liked how you didn't rush things. It's a fun read - I'm excited to see where it goes next! Keep it up!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from royowen
I love the Fox and Felix, a sort of copy of each other, but which one is real and which one is not. But they present themselves as PIs from Fine and Fine, or Fine and, of course, Felix says he's Finer, great story Bill, Pons and Ned, are very much themselves, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I love the Fox and Felix, a sort of copy of each other, but which one is real and which one is not. But they present themselves as PIs from Fine and Fine, or Fine and, of course, Felix says he's Finer, great story Bill, Pons and Ned, are very much themselves, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Roy
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